Miang in her bedroom....

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Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby Nekogami » Fri Apr 16, 2004 11:50 am

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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby Choark » Fri Apr 16, 2004 12:44 pm

I can think of two things off the top of my head that seems off =D Go me.

Her sholder, the one we see, seems too UP there. Taking from where you did the line, her sholder is resting above her ear - which makes her breats/body seem off and just means it isn't resting on the bed at all but up in the air.

This may just be me but her head seems a little big for the body.. or maybe the face part of it - or something else but something seems a little off.

However:

The pose is cool, the dog is bloody fantastic, the way you done the hair shading is pretty neat. I'll say this though: Don't be afraid to make the beds lines of the folds go more then a cm. They can stretch all across the ebd so do't be afraid to try and do it.

Oh yeah: Its a pretty damn sexy picture to.

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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby pd Rydia » Fri Apr 16, 2004 1:33 pm

Awesome. :D You've done a good job CGing the hair and especially the fur on her arms and the pup. Expression is priceless. Fingers seem a bit too big but otherwise the anatomy is seemless. Folds on the bedsheets are spiffy. Overall scene is amusing and pleases the Dia. You get one (1x) crate of cookies! <p>
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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby SALSAlys » Fri Apr 16, 2004 2:11 pm

I'll say again that I LOVE the hair, although I've already commented in DA. ^^;;


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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby Nick Shogun » Fri Apr 16, 2004 2:32 pm

Wow, I wish all super-hot-dragon-chicks slept in the nude. Would make for much better fun times.

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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby bunnygirle78 » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:29 pm

WOW!

Ok first the positives. That pose is wonderful, very very sexy. But also kinda coy. That dog looks so cute. I love this pic

The only thing I can think to sugest for improvemnt is that the bed looks to big on the top. Other than that I have no further sugestions.

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Re: Miang in her bedroom....

Unread postby Ash Fanrico » Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:08 am

Dead sexay she is!!! This shall helpeth Ash with some of his fanart.

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