The beach competition LIVES! (Nezetta)

[pd Rydia]

...or not, you know.

I just felt like drawing this.

It's Nezetta!

original (revision below)

I know the left arm (her right arm) is wonky. Aside from that, critique of all types welcome. <p>

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<center></center></p>Edited by: pd Rydia&nbsp; at: 4/9/04 9:01 pm

[Uncle Pervy]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I am amused. ^_^

Only real trouble I note is the tail; it's rather flattish (the shading takes a bit to pick out) and seems disconnected from her body.

Aside from that, lovely work. I open up my character list to your wiles, sis.

[RedEye Dragon89]

What the hell is this posticon supposed to be of?

Anyway, it looks good, only a few problems I can spot. The navel is kinda low, place it a bit higher and shorten the shirt if you want to keep it exposed.

Her ear is too high, remember that the bottom of the ear is always aligned with the bottom of the nose when looking at the face at eyelevel.

The neck is kinda long. Nothing wrong with it really, sometimes in art, usually anime, the length of the neck is exaggerated a bit. It just looks kinda funny to me, that is, when I focus on it.

Then there are the eyes, I'll probably get more in depth on the subject later...

And the arm, well, yeah.

But everything else is fine. The coloring is superb, you concentrated more on the shape of the body as well as the light source. Sometimes people only do one or the other. The basic anatomical shape is good, too. Great job, you're really improving!

[pd Rydia]

Bread!

Also: Thanks! :D

[edit]



Editted: eyes and tail shading.

Better? <p>

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<center></center></p>Edited by: [url=http://b3.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=pdrydia>pd]&nbsp; at: 4/9/04 9:00 pm

[Shinigori V2]

Nezetta:.....ARRRRRRRGGHH! ....At least no one's touching it... >_<

Good stuff, Dia. I am quite amused by the expression, expecially. ^^ <p>

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[ChancellorSmartz]

.....Sexiness....too...strong...tail...not helping...must draw as well.... <p>"Dude...you can't put salt on asians. We already taste good." -Me</p>

[SALSAlys]

Ooooh. I LOVE her swimsuit design and the pose. =3 Far too sezzy, and you've improved a lot, momma. n_n

[Raishilliah]

Whee! I likes it muchly, I do. Two things for critique. The tail doesn't seem to quite match up on both sides (or maybe it's just me, not sure), and I think the eyes would be improved with more shading-ness.

Do like the expression and those arms, though. <p>

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[Spleen]

Nice work, Dia. Her expression's all like "Why are these people staring at me?" And the Black Soul Knight swimsuit rocks.

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