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*Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Fri Feb 13, 2004 2:28 pm

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Wahoo! :{ I've really gotten into doing FFT sprites n_n

Tell me what you think of this latest one :D

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cool!

Unread postby Trom Kehra » Fri Feb 13, 2004 3:34 pm

It's really nice! ^_^ Though I can't do FFT sprites very well so I couldn't give yea a proper critique.


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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby pd Rydia » Fri Feb 13, 2004 6:02 pm

It's pretty rad, though the outlining of the top of the ear could be a little less dark, I think...the contrast is pretty stark. <p>
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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Deeum » Fri Feb 13, 2004 8:43 pm

Eh, i can't really critque much since the sprite looks badly pixelated when you enlarged it. :/

But, yeah. the outlining of the ear stands out too much, try toning down the color as dia suggested. <p><div style="text-align:center">
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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Lord Hatsuma » Sun Feb 15, 2004 12:16 pm

Just stand really far away from your screen and they don't look so pixelated :D

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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Deeum » Sun Feb 15, 2004 1:28 pm

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Also the white of the eye is in proportion to the pupil, but seems freakishly large compared to the rest of the body


Such is the style of FFT sprites. You can't really complain about it that much. Xp

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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Justice Augustus » Sun Feb 15, 2004 2:04 pm

Also the white of the eye is in proportion to the pupil, but seems freakishly large compared to the rest of the body. I know this is part of the sprite but it just seems a little too big to me.
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Re: *Is getting in over her head* More sprites up for crits!

Unread postby Justice Augustus » Sun Feb 15, 2004 2:48 pm

Ok, my bad.
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Unread postby Banjooie » Thu Feb 19, 2004 4:13 pm

The ear angle is slightly wonky: Understandable, given the perspective.

Your shading is okay, but it's a bit too stark in some places, and you need more highlights, especially in the hair.

Change the dark shade on the red coat: It looks like it turns green where the light doesn't hit.


Other than that it's good ^_^


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More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Feb 23, 2004 12:31 am

I'd like to thank you all for the crits and comments ^_^

Though I've edited that sprite according to suggestions, I'm too lazy to upload it, so I have a new one to put up instead ^^

Introducing, (or re-intro for some ^^; ) Ariousbec the Usagijin Merc!

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And bigger, for those who wish to see it...
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Once again, crits and comments appreciated ^_^

Edit: Did another one :D

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And larger version....

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Edit 3: I have a present for Kate, a sprite of Aya ^^

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And the bigger version;

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Choark » Mon Feb 23, 2004 5:51 pm

You know, when they're all small like that, those are pretty darn good. It'd be fun to see them animated but thats a lot of hard work and stuff. Are they edits or did ya do it all by the dreaded hand?

I'm not sure it'll help any but I heard of a techique to do outlines so they look more natural. Apprently if you draw the outline, like say, that elf dudes ear, instead of just doing the line on colour, choose the darkest shade of skin and the darkest shade of your hair (unless they're the same then choose the next lightest colour). The make the outline go from on to the other...


What I mean is something like this...

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So the outline of the ear doesn't standout quite as much

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Admittidly this really doesn't change much here, but .. eheh, and I used this excuse last time I provided help... I ain't much of a spriter.

This place here provides some cool help an is a lot better then me. They don't really go through FFT type sprites but you can still use the techiques used.

Anwho after all that, I like it. A lot better then anything I can do at the moment to be sure and nicely done as well. Look forward to see what ya do next =D *ruffles hair* <p><div style="text-align:center">Image </div>
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Feb 23, 2004 6:32 pm

Wow.......Thanks Cho! ^^ Despite what you may think, that's really helpful!

And I have more too.....I need to fix the hair and the right ear.(alot)

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Bigger :D

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Choark » Mon Feb 23, 2004 6:32 pm

Well glad that helped. I'm now going to try something else but I'm not sure how this will turn out. I love the Shan sprite, really well done, its just a shame the outline is so profound on that spear head is all.

So here's what I learned from somewhere I can't remember.

The outline can also follow the light source the sprite is under as well, that is, if the area is lighter then the rest, then the outline can be lighter then the outline in the darker section...

So .. like this... I think:

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To help you how I thought of it I split it into sections (sorry its so big by the way but I wanted to make sure yo could see it)

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Really simple of course but as you can see, it goes from lighter to darker as it moves from the left point of the spear to the end point.

So in the end it looks like this....

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Of course if you prefure the outlined look then no problem though it sort of clashed with the rest of the sprite. Anywho, again its only for consideration...

(and before anyone asks I'm not going to make a habit out of this, I'm just in a doing mood is all)

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Teh Kev » Mon Feb 23, 2004 6:55 pm

DEAR GOD THE HERO HAIR ON THAT AYA SPRITE! *terribly amused*

I likes the edits, Although I can't really think of any good tips... Thankfully Cho has provided something. :D <p><div style="text-align:center">Image</div></p>

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:25 pm

Thanks again Cho! *HUGS* You do a better job critiquing then you give yourself credit for ^_^


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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Deeum » Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:57 pm

:o
NOW that the board decided to work for me.. THANKS!
:D
Its been so long since Deeum had a sprite made :,(. As i told you in chat that the only things i see wrong with her is her chest jewl is supposed to be purple. and now that i can get a better look, her shoes are also black :O

But other then that... Thank you!
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Archmage144 » Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:05 pm

You know, Fern, if you're doing requests, a Hak FFT sprite would be badass. I tried to make one of those a long time ago and it looked awful. XD <p>
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:45 pm

Sure thing Bri ^_^ I wouldn't mind it at all. <p><div style="text-align:center"> Image
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Justice Augustus » Mon Feb 23, 2004 10:05 pm

The critiquing has already been done.

However there can never be enough praise: You rock!
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Feb 23, 2004 11:42 pm

Thankee SS

And I have that one Brian asked for :D

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And the larger one, as always

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Justice Augustus » Mon Feb 23, 2004 11:44 pm

You just don't stop rocking do you?
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Tue Feb 24, 2004 12:33 pm

SS: I'm not that great :{

Though I do have that sprite done for Dave. n_n;

It's that oh so lovable paladin of Ishtar :D

Image Daniel Hyral :D

And the large version.

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Edit: And one for Cho :D

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Archmage144 » Tue Feb 24, 2004 4:39 pm

Fern, those are so awesome that I can't be mad at you for calling me Bri. XD Thanks! <p>
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Wed Feb 25, 2004 1:35 pm

Thanks for all the crits and comments, everyone! ^_^

And I have more too. One for Dia ^^

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Also: Sorry! Didn't know you didn't like that name n.n;;;


Edit: And, now, one of my elven paladin, Avalon De'Winter^^
Edit 2: Just noticed something wrong with Dia-rai's eye, and that Avalon's ear is stilltoo pronounced....Gotta fix that >.>;

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:03 pm

Sure thing Div! ^_^

Edit: And one of Sable, for Zem ^^

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I figured out what was wrong with the eyes on these sprites......the program is making them the next nearest color so they aren't transparent :P

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:56 pm

Eep! Just noticed that I did not answer Cho's question! ;_;

Most of them are hand done, but various parts are from other FFT sprites.

For example, Aya's hero hair is.....>_> <_< *feels kinda silly saying this*

Well...Lets just say I got lazy and recolored a chocobo tail, flipped it upside-down, resized it a bit and tah dah, instant hair-do ^.^; <p><div style="text-align:center"> Image
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Divinegon2130 » Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:58 pm

I'd like to say these sprites are just plain AWESOME, Fern.

I want to get into more nitpicky stuff, but people before me have already done it.

Also, if you're still taking requests.... *looks through possibilities* ....can I ask for one of Daryl (yes, that nezujin Fern ran across not too long ago)? <p>

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Re: More! :D

Unread postby ValkyrieShan » Wed Feb 25, 2004 3:06 pm

Aw, it's been a while since I got a sprite. Thank you! You also managed to replicate her weapon better than I can, I'm jealous. :'(

Those are all very well done, and I'm especially partial to the Dia one. Must be the wings. Those are niiice wings. Keep it up!




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Re: More! :D

Unread postby pd Rydia » Wed Feb 25, 2004 3:08 pm

Those are indeed nice wings. Good job, Fern! I like it. <p>
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Zemyla » Wed Feb 25, 2004 4:34 pm

I love the sprite you made of her. Thanks! <p>-----
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Re: More! :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Wed Feb 25, 2004 7:55 pm

You're welcome, Dia, Zem, Shanny ^^ T'wasn't a problem.



Whelp.........Concerning Div's sprite. I couldn't figure out if he wanted the Nezujin or human form of Daryl, so I did both ^.^;

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And human;

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Wai! =D

Unread postby FF Fanatic 80 » Thu Feb 26, 2004 3:12 pm

FFT Dan, wee! =D Tis spiffy Fern.

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Re: Wai! =D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Fri Feb 27, 2004 12:12 am

*chuckles* n_n

Glad ya like it Dave.

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Re: Wai! =D

Unread postby Choark » Fri Feb 27, 2004 6:37 am

Yay! Thankies very much! =D *high fives* <p><div style="text-align:center">Image </div>
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Re: Wai! =D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Fri Feb 27, 2004 11:35 am

You're welcome Cho ^^ *high-fived, then huggles back* <p><div style="text-align:center"> Image
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Woot!

Unread postby SALSAlys » Fri Feb 27, 2004 1:11 pm

These are far too wai, and I love how you got Aya's hair. XD

I'd request a character, but then I'd feel like a gimp.


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Re: Woot!

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Fri Feb 27, 2004 8:39 pm

Please do, Lyssy! ^^ I don't mind!

Edit: And I should mention. You aren't a gimp, and definitely wouldn't be, asking for a sprite :{ <p><div style="text-align:center"> Image
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Re: Woot!

Unread postby Divinegon2130 » Sun Feb 29, 2004 12:08 am

I was looking for the nezujin variant, Fern.

Spiffy either way. I'll keep it that simple. <p>

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Wah! *gimps*

Unread postby SALSAlys » Mon Mar 01, 2004 1:19 pm

Yay! I get to gimp?!

'Kay then. Could I have a sprite of Karin Vaza? ^^;

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Re: Wah! *gimps*

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Sun Mar 07, 2004 12:08 am

Despite what you may think! I will have more sprites up soon! I just worked the past couple of days and such...(I'll be free to finish stuff up by at the earliest, tomorrow n_n; )

For now, I just up my post count, inform you of such, and show off my new siggy :D (Even though IT isn't done either XD) <p><div style="text-align:center"> Image
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