The Gem of Kohlingen

[KingOfDoma]

Excellent, Pervy, excellent. All round. Well written, intriguing point of view (2nd person. Don't see that much...) and, best of all, it was entertaining. Well done! <p>--------------------
</br><center><font size=-1>king (kng) n. 1. A male sovereign.
</br> 2. One that is supreme or preeminent in a particular group, category, or sphere.
</br>3. Major butt kicker.</p>

[FlamingDeth]

...no, Chuck. Third person limited. If it was second person, you would be seeing the word "you" everywhere in there, and stuff. Which wouldn't work very well in anything but a choose-your-own-adventure book. So...yeah. It's in third person limited, but what I think you meant to say is that you don't see something written in present tense very often.


...and...uh...stuff.


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And now, since I want to be unique like everbody else, a quote:
"So what you're saying is that Nintendo and Sony are in league with each other, and possibly the Red Skull?" - EKDS5K</p>Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=pdrydia>pd]&nbsp; at: 6/10/05 16:53

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