The wish of eternity.

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The wish of eternity.

Unread postby TheGreatUkGamer » Fri May 07, 2004 4:31 pm

"This is it" thought Jaso, he'd finally reached his destination of sayro valley. He was home. After reuniting with his friends and family, the village was attacked and burned down by 'the emperor'. He had no one.









No one.


This is set in a place called Yu tay.
It's about how your characters meet and interact with Jaso and help him. There may be some fights where necessary but I want it kept to a minimum. Oh and they don't have to help Jaso, they can be against him. But not fight him every post. <p>I am so smart! I am so smart! *shot*</p>Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=thegreatukgamer>TheGreatUkGamer</A] at: 5/7/04 4:37 pm

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Re: The wish of eternity.

Unread postby pd Rydia » Fri May 07, 2004 6:02 pm

This isn't really up to RPGWW standards -- it's four sentences long, man. It really, really, really needs detail -- about the character, setting, and why other characters would want to join in the first place. An RP is supposed to be a work of art in its own right -- not just a story all to its own, but a well-written one that's interesting and fresh to read. You might want to try again, or perhaps find another RP community to try this RP out at. <p>
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