The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

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The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby PruePiperPheobePaige » Mon Nov 17, 2003 10:43 pm

The moon danced on the castle walls of Malahai.A forgotten Rogue who left that past behind stood on a balcony.Her hands raised high over her head.Wind swirled around her,her long black gown sweeping the balcony floor.Her brown hair was waving around in the wind.She looked royal yet evil.She was smart and many loved and admired her beauty.No one knew of her past,she had long since forgotten.


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby pd Rydia » Mon Nov 17, 2003 10:56 pm

(Uh oh, be careful. This character looks like a stereotype, and you should fear that!

No, but in all seriousness? This isn't really up to snuff. Learn to space properly and bolster your post with some more details and description. The post is all skin and bones, there's no meat to it! Oh, and you'll want to advertise your RP in the OOC forum to see if there's any interest in your RP at all, before starting it.

Thank you, and have a good flight.)


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby SuperRube » Wed Nov 19, 2003 2:29 am

But, Diane! How can you not love and admire her for her beauty and... uh... street savvy.

Oh, and don't forget the name. It sounds like she started typing something and changed her mind about what she was typing three times before she finished. How can you not love that?


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby Zemyla » Wed Nov 19, 2003 12:06 pm

No, she's simply making sure that her name is at least four characters long.


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby PruePiperPheobePaige » Thu Nov 20, 2003 5:56 pm

WTF?You people are so harsh..learn how to give some positive in with the negative before the world swallows you up and brings you to me and I shoot your head off and dance in your blood.


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby PruePiperPheobePaige » Thu Nov 20, 2003 5:57 pm

And my name is from another board that has to do with Charmed...and I am very forgetful so I use the same name for every board.


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby pd Rydia » Thu Nov 20, 2003 11:06 pm

That's the best response ever.


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby Nimbus Mage » Fri Nov 21, 2003 9:12 pm

I'd say the best way to fix something like this is to add something more detailed to it in someone elses post! I like stuff like this so you have maximum custimization on what happens next and what you can create. Like that other guy said, turn a negative into a positive!


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Re: The Fall of The Kingdom-#1-The Kingdom of Malahai

Unread postby Deeum » Sat Nov 22, 2003 1:19 am

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WTF?You people are so harsh..learn how to give some positive in with the negative before the world swallows you up and brings you to me and I shoot your head off and dance in your blood


Learn to read the header before you post! Doesn't take long to read. :D



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