Non-RPGWW related Poetry for Crits :D

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Non-RPGWW related Poetry for Crits :D

Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Mar 03, 2003 10:59 pm

Well....As the title says....These poems are not related to RPGWW...They're about another RPG game I play at lunch with a group of friends of mine n_n Ahead of time....they're meant to be silly(Or non-sensical if you want to put it that way)

Dragon Maw Colleseium

Place your bets,
Just wait and see;
Who's the winner going to be?

Mighty mage?
Or noble knight?
Who cares right now,
Just start the fight!

Cheers shouted,
Taunts flung,
The fight is over,
Praises are sung.

Whom is the victor?
Wouldn't you like to know?
Keep a close and watchful eye,
On whom the clerics have in tow.

I think the 1st one is better, composicionally, but I love the 1st and 2nd lines of the 2nd poem Image

Poem 2 Image

Time Mage: Ode to Terry K. Image

Archaeic spells in ancient tongue,
The very thread of time is sung.
Weaving strands to bend to his will,
His commands he awaits to be fufilled.

The enemy stops short in his tracks,
He's frozen to the spot.
This time mage spell is useful
More often then it's not.

The foe in question vanquished,
His team mates little harmed.
And all this done by a crazy mage,
A time mage with only one arm.

Gimme comments crits and such....I already know these poems just suck :P <p><div style="text-align:center">"You know child, I have a saying that may or may not help with your situation...Life is like a painting; You choose what goes on the easel, but sometimes you don't know what colors are on your palet...The only thing to do is dip the brush in and try it..." ~Antoneo Rodriguez (My character, so make your own philosophical remarks XD)</div></p>

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Re: Non-RPGWW related Poetry for Crits :D

Unread postby Capntastic » Mon Mar 03, 2003 11:04 pm

Hurrah! Very spiffy! Write more and whatnot :{

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Re: Non-RPGWW related Poetry for Crits :D

Unread postby Lady Freya Vanir » Sun Mar 16, 2003 8:53 pm

Wow....too cool. I like, I it again, do it again!!!
<p>"I am the beautiful warrior goddess, look at me the wrong way, and I just might miss my target..."
-Freya Vanir



Unread postby Firnthuleien » Mon Mar 17, 2003 12:22 pm

Wow o_o Someone actually likes my poetry?!

*dies of shock*



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