Virgil mark 2!

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Virgil mark 2!

Unread postby The Great Nevareh » Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:50 pm

I put a bit more work into this one. Two of the poses I completely re-did, and I had to "fix" the proportions a bit. Comments?
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Changes from last sheet:
Nixed the pink hair. It looked funny.
Altered the proportions a bit.
Nixed the handkerchief. Didn't like it.
Made him a bit more stylish and a bit less Gau.
Changed the "Attacking" and "Taking Damage" sprites. <p>[---------------------------]
"There is great disorder under Heaven, and the situation is excellent."
-Mao Tse-Tung</p>Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=thegreatnevareh>The] at: 9/24/04 5:52 pm

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Re: Virgil mark 2!

Unread postby FlamingDeth » Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:58 am

Well, uh, they're sprites. And I recall liking the hankerchief.

Anyhow, you'd probably get more comments if we could see them. I reccomend condensing the sheet (you have a lot of blank space there) and reposting it at 2x magnification, and taking a couple example sprites out (some of the ones you like, and the ones you don't like, so we can offer advice) and sticking them up at 4x magnification. I am too lazy to do it myself. :D <p>
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Re: Virgil mark 2!

Unread postby Molokidan » Mon Sep 27, 2004 7:35 am

Fdeth has a point there. It's super hard to tell what color his clothes are at that tiny size.

Although, I like the grey-dark green color combo. At least. . if that *is* green. . .*squints* <p>---------------

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Re: Virgil mark 2!

Unread postby The Great Nevareh » Mon Sep 27, 2004 10:12 pm

I don't know how to do the things you ask and I don't host my stuff. The Handkerchief you speak of was less of a handkerchief and more of a shawl- I can try to add that back in, since I tossed it to get rid of the excess size. <p>[---------------------------]
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who is this mysterious masked person?!

Unread postby witmmp » Tue Sep 28, 2004 1:10 am

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Re: who is this mysterious masked person?!

Unread postby Molokidan » Tue Sep 28, 2004 1:13 am

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Mr. Duck sez:

"Try useful feedback, Sr. Molo, plz k thx!" <p>---------------

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Re: who is this mysterious masked person?!

Unread postby The Great Nevareh » Tue Sep 28, 2004 1:42 am

I am now somewhat curious as to what Molo said in the first place.
And who did me the favor? Thanks in advance. <p>[---------------------------]
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Re: who is this mysterious masked person?!

Unread postby Molokidan » Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:03 am

Damn that Mr. Duck!!! He follows me everywhere!

Anyway, Nevareh, I simply stated the meaning of life, but Mr. Duck had to go and ruin my fun as usual!

Anyway, nice spriting!

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