[Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

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[Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

Unread postby Nekogami » Tue May 27, 2003 4:30 pm

It was a cold, dark night like any other. I was sitting in my office in the shady part of Doma. Sparky, my boy Friday, was typing up the report on my latest capture. I reclined back in my seat and tilted my hat. It was a good day to me.

Who am I?

Detective Enlil,Private Eye. I work for beans but the real reward is in the smiling faces of hard-luck shmoes. The world's a cruel, cruel place for them but they try their best. Yeah, everything I do is for them. Wanna make something of it? I thought not.

Just then there was a knock at my door. Some fella bust in looking like a pack of crenshaws (A large hyena looking beast with no skin on it's face) was on his heels. I stood up in surprise. So did Sparky...but then again he doesn't have a face so I never know how he's feeling exactly. Something you learn to get used to when it comes to Dopplegangers.

"Y...ya gotta help me, Lil!" The man was young, about 20. Human. Called me Lil, must be a regular about the slums.

"What do you need?"

"The.......The Papa is after me." That's when I knew...this'd be serious. <p>

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Nekogami Character Pantheon--Deviant Art Gallery--LiveJournal</div>
<span style="font-size:xx-small;">Words to live by:
OMG PRIAM: ninja sex would be neither felt nor seen by either partner
OMG PRIAM: each would just suddenly need a smoke
Choark: Good luck there. You'll have to shit out darkness and send people into oblivion.</span></p>

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Re: [Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

Unread postby pd Rydia » Tue May 27, 2003 4:55 pm

Bravo. o.o Looking forward to reading more. <p>
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Re: [Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

Unread postby SALSAlys » Tue May 27, 2003 9:20 pm

Same as momma. *camps out chibifully for next part*


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Re: [Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

Unread postby Uncle Pervy » Wed May 28, 2003 4:04 pm

This amuses and frightens me. :D

Keep going, Neko. I wanna see where you take this :D <p><div style="text-align:center">Image Image Image Image Image ImageImage</div></p>

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Re: [Fanfic-Au]Detective Enlil

Unread postby Nekogami » Mon Aug 11, 2003 12:05 pm

Yes, very serious indeed. For many years, I had been tracking down the elusive trail of Doma's most heinous crime organization. Wherever they go, the lead a trail of destruction and sorrow, as people's lives crumble to the will of Illusar and other drugs.

She cast on my hat and coat. "Tell me, sir. Why is that Papa after you?"

The man wrung his hands and looked at my floor. I felt ashamed for a moment; I hadn't swept in days. "Well, ....I used to work for the Papa. 2 long, long years... I-I couldn't help but run. It was too dangerous! My family....I don't care about the money anymore. But....I know too much..."

My eyes narrowed and in my heart burned the fire of chivalry. "What do you know, sir?"

"I know where the Papa are headquartered....I know there leaders....I know... Everything."

I sucked in air. This is the lead I needed. With the Papa out of they way, I'd never have to worry about the hearts and lives of Doma's slums. The one hurdle tripping me from creating an environment of heave in Doma could be eliminated. Finally, I could bring light to the darkness of the slums.

"Sparky, call Police Chief Pervis. Tell him this man needs and escort. We've finally got them!"


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<div style="text-align:center">
Nekogami Character Pantheon--Deviant Art Gallery--LiveJournal</div>
<span style="font-size:xx-small;">Words to live by:
OMG PRIAM: ninja sex would be neither felt nor seen by either partner
OMG PRIAM: each would just suddenly need a smoke
Choark: Good luck there. You'll have to shit out darkness and send people into oblivion.</span></p>Edited by: pd Rydia&nbsp; Image at: 6/12/05 15:11


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