This character most likely has some mechanical flaws in it, but I can’t figure anything else out without people telling me. As I’m unfamiliar with the system, please bear with me, and since I don’t have access to the manual for standard BESM. So, please tell me what I’ve done wrong.
Edit: I talked with Shawn, and he told me a few of my problems. Mostly he told me about how emotionally unstable I was, and how I should seek help, but some of the problems he addressed had to do with the sheet, and therefore I applied his advice. Future advice expected.
Noah Balbanes(If you recognize this name, you get a cookie! Or nothing. Since I'm cheap.)
Note: I did some re-working due to new information that I found on Oath's stats. He lost Flight and higher Toughness, and I re-distributed other points into the re-worked weapons systems, improved shielding, and Jumping. I also got rid of the DEIP technology in exchange for a ficticious technology that I understand the workings of and thus can spout techno-babble about it.)
Age: 24
Physical appearance: About 5'8'', wiry and slim. Can't weigh more than 145 lbs by appearance, but in truth weights somewhere around 160 lbs, since he is made up almost entirely of muscle. His face is thin but kind, with soft green eyes and well-kempt dark hair that falls neatly around his smooth, unblemished face. He is, without a doubt, extremely attractive and bishy. His main problem is that people tend to think he's 16.
Persona: Noah is probably one of the nicest and most unassuming people you will ever meet. He's really a nice guy, but he is definitely not a leader. He is not made to take initiative, and therefore is easy to walk on and get to do what you like. He's not suave or debonair, and thus fails when trying to attract someone. Oddly enough, there are plenty of people who end up attracted to HIM in a non-reciprocating manner. Noah also is easily emotionally hurt, since he tends to look down on himself. He also doesn’t tend to contradict people about his age, even if they’re wrong.
Noah is, also, a regionally famous person. Many people have heard of him, though no one is quite sure what he looks like because there tend not to be many pictures of people like him circling around at once. His Mecha (which he calls “Oathâ€) is also somewhat famous, and when he claims to be THE Noah Balbanes who pilots the Oath, people look at him blankly. Since he isn’t very assertive, he doesn’t force the issue. So, if people don’t believe him, he probably isn’t going to correct them.
Backstory: Noah is the youngest child of a prolifically large and incredibly talented family of 19. He had a lot to live up to, as all of his elder siblings were strong, athletic, brilliant, willful, resourceful, charismatic, and handsome, just like his parents. Because he considered himself less able than the rest of his family, he tried his hardest to instead have a heart of gold. However, having a heart of gold only really works if you have a spine of steel and a will of iron. Thus he became even easier to walk on.
In a subconscious effort to be unique, but mostly because he didn’t want to compete with the rest of his family, Noah joined the army to become a soldier- And was tested as a pilot of incredible potential. So he received lots of intensive training, which made him a great combatant and yet did nothing to change his outlook on life or his general personality.
Noah proceeded to make a name for himself (albeit not directly or even willingly) in military circles by being a crafty, skilled, and astoundingly able mecha pilot, and he received his own commission at an age before most pilots receive theirs.
Noah then distinguished himself in battle multiple times until he received no mean amount of fame which was never attached to him. People either didn’t make the connection between Noah and “The†Noah Balbanes, thought that it was just a coincidence, or thought that Noah was actively trying to impersonate the famous Balbanes. Only a few people actually believe him, because he rarely if ever presses the issue due to his low self esteem and drive.
Noah also has yet to experience anything like love, lust, a crush, or anything. He’s too quiet and young-looking to attract anyone his own age, and he’s too law-abiding and self-moral to willingly attract someone in the age group he LOOKS like he belongs in. However, even though he isn’t attractive to those he wishes to attract, he IS attractive to some people who, for some reason or another, decide they must have him. These men and women range from pedophiles to anime freaks to high-schoolers and everyone in between. There’s just something about a very youthful bishounen that attracts them to him like flies to whatever it is flies really like. And he really, really wishes they would go away, though he doesn’t have the heart to tell them that. Since he never openly rejects anyone, he is still hotly contested amongst his admirers. Strangely enough, not one of his admirers think that he’s the same person as “The†Noah Balbanes, since they all think Noah is somewhere between the ages of 14 and 17.
He leads a quirky life. And, even though it has its huge, gaping faults and inadequacies that he really shouldn’t put up with, he isn’t saying anything. He’s just too nice to.
Noah Balbanes’ Stats:
Body 7
Mind 7
Soul 7
HP- 70
EP- 70
Attributes:
Combat Rating- 7
Defensive combat Rating- 5
Hightly skilled- 4 ranks
Heightened Senses- 1 rank
Own Big Mecha (3) (60 points)
            Point Total- 12
Defects:
Ageism- 1 point
Guy/Girl Magnet- 2 points
Easily Distracted (by Political debate)- 1 point
Fame- 2 points
Conditional Ownership (Army)- 2 points
Mecha Stats (Oath)-
(Notes on Oath- What started out as a normal Mecha when Noah first was issued it has slowly become a highly customized and highly recognizeable Mecha that perfectly suits Noah's piloting style. It uses Gauss theorem technology in its weapons, effectively doing tremendous damage with pebbles. Oath is capable of quick reaction times in exchange for flight, and is capable of absorbing damage at a much higher rate due to its force field. It also travels more slowly than other, swifter mechas due to its lack of flight and low ground speed. Oath is a Soldier's mecha, made for fighting, not for logistics or information gathering.)
HP- 80
Attributes
Summonable Rank 2 (8 points) (Mech takes no time to arrive)
Personal Force Field Rank 4 (12 points- Regenerating, can block 45 damage)
Special Attacks (4 ranks main, 2 sub-weapons) (18 points)
Gauss Cannon (4 ranks, maximum force) (16 points)
A weapon that shoots small, mundane projectiles at relativistic speeds. One projectile is used in each attack, but the sheer kinetic energy of the projectile makes it as damaging as many other conventional weapons, by way of the e=mc^2 phenomenon. However, the projectile must be fired at a certain threshold- below that threshold the damage is negligible, and this weapon fires at just above the threshold energy necessary to damage opponents. This projectile, going several hundred thousand times faster than a bullet, cannot be stopped by being shot out of the air, and functions much like a beam weapon.
75 damage to a target, ranged combat
Gauss Shells(3 rank- Long Range, Area Effect (2) Uses Ammunition, Max Force, Activation Time 1, 1 point- secondary)
A reliable prototype of a weapon that uses the Gauss theorems to project special rounds over long distances very quickly. By magnetically "exciting" the shells (which takes a short period of time), the cannon can fire these shells at relativistic speeds over long distances. These shells explode upon impact, and are designed in such a way that detonation is next-to-impossible unless the weapon arrives with appropriate kinetic energy (which is traditionally imparted by the cannon when fired). Due to the viciously high speed at which these shots are fired, they appear to arrive instantly at their destination, and are as difficult to dodge as a beam weapon. These shells are shot using the same machinery as the projectiles from the Gauss Cannon, but due to their much higher rest mass react much differently in the process, and thus do not do the sheer damage that the projectiles do. However, they do travel extremely long distances and they explode upon impact, so the trade-off is worthwhile to a degree.
45 damage to targets in area, whatever appropriate area is for a mecha.
Machine Vulcan(1 point- secondary)(Auto-Fire, Innacurate, 3 rank)
A more mundane and easy-to-use alternative to Gauss weaponry that is capable of attacking on a smaller scale. Is ideal for smaller opponents. Built into the mecha.
45 damage to a target.
Life Support Rank 2 (2 points)
Toughness Rank 2 (8 points)
Speed rank 5 (5 points)
Electronic Countermeasures rank 2- Anti-Missle, Anti-Sensor, Anti-Communications (3 points)
Jumping: Rank 4 (4 points)
Old Oath- Since New Oath is unapproved and I'm made of smelly cheese.
Skills-HP- 100
Attributes
Summonable Rank 2 (8 points) (Mech takes no time to arrive)
Personal Force Field Rank 3 (9 points- Regenerating, can block 30 damage)
Special Attacks (3 ranks main, 2 sub-weapons) (14 points)
DEIP (Directed Explosive Impact Pulse) (3 ranks,) (12 points)
45 damage to a target, ranged combat
Beam Sword (1 rank, secondary, Melee)(1 point)
30 damage to a target, Ranged Combat
45 damage to targets in area, whatever appropriate area is for a mecha.
Machine Vulcan(1 point- secondary)(Auto-Fire, Innacurate, 1 rank)
A more mundane and easy-to-use alternative to Gauss weaponry that is capable of attacking on a smaller scale. Is ideal for smaller opponents. Built into the mecha.
15 damage to a target.
Life Support Rank 2 (2 points)
Toughness Rank 3 (8 points)
Speed rank 5 (5 points)
Electronic Countermeasures rank 2- Anti-Missle, Anti-Sensor, Anti-Communications (3 points)
Flight rank 2 (8 points)
Piloting rank 4
Gun Combat rank 4
Heavy Weapons rank 2
Military Science rank 2
Melee Combat Rank 1
<p>"There is great disorder under Heaven, and the situation is excellent."
-Mao Tse-Tung</p>
Edited by: The Great Nevareh at: 10/23/04 2:33 pm