Avatar (RPG)

hellow nice to meet you all. Ive had this rpg Idea for I while so here it is.
Story
It was the middle of the night and the city of Lycone was on fire. Peoples screams could be heard everywhere as they ran away from the dragons the enemy avatars. A black dragon swooped barely missing the tops of buildings as he released fire from his mouth. Avatars of different shapes and sizes lay everywhere seemingly slain their energy used up or their master’s dead. The might of the King’s and Queen’s army could not hold back the unexpected onslaught. The kingdom had received a letter a week before promising an attack if they did not surrender but Lycone was proud. They never imagined that some unknown man could provide a challenge for them. Not for the country with the strongest army in all Achene but Draco Redmoon was no ordinary man. He possessed great strength and was a fearsome warrior killing entire villages alone. He passed all of this strength and malice to his avatars. The ones that were now destroying Lacone.
The king stood on a balcony keeping the other dragon at bay. This dragon was white with red eyes his claws had been stained with blood. The king was still in his nightclothes his blond hair was soaked with sweat and his hazel brown eyes were lit with rage. He wouldn’t let this intruder inside this part of the palace. No not to the nursery where his six year old son slept. His daughter and his wife were inside comforting the boy but the king dares not let them fight even though his wife was skilled he would prefer to die and take the monster with him so that his family could live. His avatars were a knight and a griffin. The knight was seven feet tall he wore an armor of red and black and he carried a large sword. He rode on the griffins back the griffin had golden feathers. It used its claws to battle the dragon as the Knight used his sword. The king had a bow and a great number of arrows. He used his magic the magic that only the royal family possessed to put a spell on the arrows so that they flew and always hit their target and then bursting like an explosive caused massive damage. The white dragon was covered in blood but It wasn’t alone the black dragon came to fight at its side over powering the king and his avatars. The white dragon saw its chance and broke through but the queen was ready holding her sword she and her avatar fought side by side. The Queens had her black hair pulled back her dark blue eyes shone with hatred. Her avatar was a six-foot tall female knight with blue and silver armor she held a sword although not as big as the kings knight. The queen’s other avatar was a griffin with white feathers. It carried the children out of the room. The queen and her knight attacked, the dragon now trapped inside of the palace couldn’t protect itself was and was slain. It disappeared returning to its master. The black dragon flew off leaving the battle as if it heard a sound. The Queen rushed to the balcony and helped her husband stand. There was a crash the queens griffin was sent flying bursting though the palace walls by some unknown force. The black dragon took this opportunity to snatch up the children as they fell from the griffins back. The queens avatar fell its energy used up. It took all of the Queens and her avatars strength to keep the king form jumping off the balcony. A note was found in the hallway in the next morning it was a ransom note. The entire city grieved for their losses their once proud kingdom in ruins.
Avatars are born from our sprits. They are our guides and our protectors. They fight for our behalf. An avatar will only grow in strength if the person grows also. The kingdom of Lycone is a very proud country having an abundance of food, mountains of riches and the best army in all of Achene. But a dark shadow looms over Lycone a man who claims to have the strongest avatar. He has already proven his might by infiltrating the capital and capturing princess Alaina and prince Stephen. He is ransoming them for the kingdom his ultimatum the destruction of Lycone. The king in his grief has given up all hope but the queen has assembled a team to go rescue her children and save the kingdom.
Basically everyone makes up a character and two avatars. Your avatar can be anything but indestructible and it can have any ability but the ability to destroy the world. It would also be cool if someone would like to make up a bad guy you know besides the main one.
Characters
These are the characters that I will be playing as. It is also a model of the character profiles.
Kila Thomas
Appearance: 5’5â€, brown skinned, black hair, d. brown eyes. Wears the blue and sliver uniform of the Queens knights. Keeps her hair in a ponytail.
Female
Age:20
Occupation: Captain in the Queens army
Avatars: Isis and Starchaser
Weapons: saber
(the queens army wears blue and silver)
Isis
Appearance: 5’9, heavily tanned, white hair, lavender eyes. Has white wings and wears a white dress that stops above the knees. Has short spiky hair.
Female
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: Sais (ummm scratches head to think of another well known character that has the same weapon. Kayura form Ronin Warriors, Raphael (the red one) from teenage mutant ninja turtles.)
Powers/ Abilities: She is a magic user. She has power over wind and light and knows a variety of spells. She can make illusions.
Starchaser
Appearance: A black cat but when trans formed turns into a black panther that is bigger than usual. Green eyes, wears a silver collar with runes on it.
Male
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: claws, teeth
Powers/Abilities: Can run very fast and is very agile, uses roar to block attacks, confuse, or scare an enemy.
Tian Chioc
Appearance: 6’3, very muscular, has a peach golden skin tone, black eyes, and black hair. Wears his long hair in a braid down his back. Wears the red and black uniform of the Kings army.
Male
Age: 26
Occupation: General in Kings army
Avatars: Charon and Nightingale
Weapons: katanas
(kings army red and black)
Charon
Appearance: He is a centaur. His horse parts are black. He is very muscular, has blond hair and blue eyes. He wears his blond medium length blond hair down. He has a wide metal belt where his human and horse parts meet. The belt has a scull on it.
Male
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: Halberd
Powers/Abilities: Has a spell that can bind enemies in chains. He is very fast and he can make duplicates of himself.
Nightingale: Half woman half bird she has a bird’s head and wings on her back. Her feathers are steel gray. She has brown eyes and wears a short green dress.
Female
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: crossbows
Powers/Abilities: Can create a cloud of darkness to confuse enemies. She can also turn invisible.
You do not have to be in the armies you can be a mercenary, a bard or just an average joe who's pissed cause his little sister got killed or something.
Rules
1. Pretty standard please don't try to be the "hero" i.e having the ablity to take out anyone and anything. Being cocky and arrogant is fine but I'm sure that my character Tian will have more than enough of that. Oh and don't be afraid to start arguments with other characters random people on a journy won't get along anyway.
2. We will all be playing as more than one character since each person has two avatars (one for each side of their personalitys) Both avatars can have the ablity to talk or not it all depends on what you make them. No immortal,super strong, I can crush you with my pinky toe avatars. Thats what the bad guy is for. You can have up to two main characters as long as you can keep them in character.
3. Write as if you are writing a book.(or at least try to I can't write at all) Try to make each post as long as you can with out well you know taking over. Describe all that you can, have your character interact with their avatars or with your other character. Have your character ask other rp's caracters stuff. No curseing (unless your character got blown up or stubbed his toe or something drastic like that )
Thats about it for me. I'll think of something else to add latter and I am open to suggestions.
Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=mecegirl>Mecegirl</A] at: 12/2/04 18:01
Story
It was the middle of the night and the city of Lycone was on fire. Peoples screams could be heard everywhere as they ran away from the dragons the enemy avatars. A black dragon swooped barely missing the tops of buildings as he released fire from his mouth. Avatars of different shapes and sizes lay everywhere seemingly slain their energy used up or their master’s dead. The might of the King’s and Queen’s army could not hold back the unexpected onslaught. The kingdom had received a letter a week before promising an attack if they did not surrender but Lycone was proud. They never imagined that some unknown man could provide a challenge for them. Not for the country with the strongest army in all Achene but Draco Redmoon was no ordinary man. He possessed great strength and was a fearsome warrior killing entire villages alone. He passed all of this strength and malice to his avatars. The ones that were now destroying Lacone.
The king stood on a balcony keeping the other dragon at bay. This dragon was white with red eyes his claws had been stained with blood. The king was still in his nightclothes his blond hair was soaked with sweat and his hazel brown eyes were lit with rage. He wouldn’t let this intruder inside this part of the palace. No not to the nursery where his six year old son slept. His daughter and his wife were inside comforting the boy but the king dares not let them fight even though his wife was skilled he would prefer to die and take the monster with him so that his family could live. His avatars were a knight and a griffin. The knight was seven feet tall he wore an armor of red and black and he carried a large sword. He rode on the griffins back the griffin had golden feathers. It used its claws to battle the dragon as the Knight used his sword. The king had a bow and a great number of arrows. He used his magic the magic that only the royal family possessed to put a spell on the arrows so that they flew and always hit their target and then bursting like an explosive caused massive damage. The white dragon was covered in blood but It wasn’t alone the black dragon came to fight at its side over powering the king and his avatars. The white dragon saw its chance and broke through but the queen was ready holding her sword she and her avatar fought side by side. The Queens had her black hair pulled back her dark blue eyes shone with hatred. Her avatar was a six-foot tall female knight with blue and silver armor she held a sword although not as big as the kings knight. The queen’s other avatar was a griffin with white feathers. It carried the children out of the room. The queen and her knight attacked, the dragon now trapped inside of the palace couldn’t protect itself was and was slain. It disappeared returning to its master. The black dragon flew off leaving the battle as if it heard a sound. The Queen rushed to the balcony and helped her husband stand. There was a crash the queens griffin was sent flying bursting though the palace walls by some unknown force. The black dragon took this opportunity to snatch up the children as they fell from the griffins back. The queens avatar fell its energy used up. It took all of the Queens and her avatars strength to keep the king form jumping off the balcony. A note was found in the hallway in the next morning it was a ransom note. The entire city grieved for their losses their once proud kingdom in ruins.
Avatars are born from our sprits. They are our guides and our protectors. They fight for our behalf. An avatar will only grow in strength if the person grows also. The kingdom of Lycone is a very proud country having an abundance of food, mountains of riches and the best army in all of Achene. But a dark shadow looms over Lycone a man who claims to have the strongest avatar. He has already proven his might by infiltrating the capital and capturing princess Alaina and prince Stephen. He is ransoming them for the kingdom his ultimatum the destruction of Lycone. The king in his grief has given up all hope but the queen has assembled a team to go rescue her children and save the kingdom.
Basically everyone makes up a character and two avatars. Your avatar can be anything but indestructible and it can have any ability but the ability to destroy the world. It would also be cool if someone would like to make up a bad guy you know besides the main one.
Characters
These are the characters that I will be playing as. It is also a model of the character profiles.
Kila Thomas
Appearance: 5’5â€, brown skinned, black hair, d. brown eyes. Wears the blue and sliver uniform of the Queens knights. Keeps her hair in a ponytail.
Female
Age:20
Occupation: Captain in the Queens army
Avatars: Isis and Starchaser
Weapons: saber
(the queens army wears blue and silver)
Isis
Appearance: 5’9, heavily tanned, white hair, lavender eyes. Has white wings and wears a white dress that stops above the knees. Has short spiky hair.
Female
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: Sais (ummm scratches head to think of another well known character that has the same weapon. Kayura form Ronin Warriors, Raphael (the red one) from teenage mutant ninja turtles.)
Powers/ Abilities: She is a magic user. She has power over wind and light and knows a variety of spells. She can make illusions.
Starchaser
Appearance: A black cat but when trans formed turns into a black panther that is bigger than usual. Green eyes, wears a silver collar with runes on it.
Male
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: claws, teeth
Powers/Abilities: Can run very fast and is very agile, uses roar to block attacks, confuse, or scare an enemy.
Tian Chioc
Appearance: 6’3, very muscular, has a peach golden skin tone, black eyes, and black hair. Wears his long hair in a braid down his back. Wears the red and black uniform of the Kings army.
Male
Age: 26
Occupation: General in Kings army
Avatars: Charon and Nightingale
Weapons: katanas
(kings army red and black)
Charon
Appearance: He is a centaur. His horse parts are black. He is very muscular, has blond hair and blue eyes. He wears his blond medium length blond hair down. He has a wide metal belt where his human and horse parts meet. The belt has a scull on it.
Male
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: Halberd
Powers/Abilities: Has a spell that can bind enemies in chains. He is very fast and he can make duplicates of himself.
Nightingale: Half woman half bird she has a bird’s head and wings on her back. Her feathers are steel gray. She has brown eyes and wears a short green dress.
Female
Occupation: Avatar
Weapons: crossbows
Powers/Abilities: Can create a cloud of darkness to confuse enemies. She can also turn invisible.
You do not have to be in the armies you can be a mercenary, a bard or just an average joe who's pissed cause his little sister got killed or something.
Rules
1. Pretty standard please don't try to be the "hero" i.e having the ablity to take out anyone and anything. Being cocky and arrogant is fine but I'm sure that my character Tian will have more than enough of that. Oh and don't be afraid to start arguments with other characters random people on a journy won't get along anyway.
2. We will all be playing as more than one character since each person has two avatars (one for each side of their personalitys) Both avatars can have the ablity to talk or not it all depends on what you make them. No immortal,super strong, I can crush you with my pinky toe avatars. Thats what the bad guy is for. You can have up to two main characters as long as you can keep them in character.
3. Write as if you are writing a book.(or at least try to I can't write at all) Try to make each post as long as you can with out well you know taking over. Describe all that you can, have your character interact with their avatars or with your other character. Have your character ask other rp's caracters stuff. No curseing (unless your character got blown up or stubbed his toe or something drastic like that )
Thats about it for me. I'll think of something else to add latter and I am open to suggestions.
Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=mecegirl>Mecegirl</A] at: 12/2/04 18:01