The Legacy: Comments?

All right, I'm calling my theoretical game "The Legacy."
It's a massive thing I'm planning, and highly detailed, so I'll be collecting my thoughts here.
Since no one has the vaguest idea what this is, I'll start transcribing my notes as to world-setting here.
"I just wanted to build a better world... Is that so wrong?"
- The Hero Silas Vashti, Morrannon Prison Transcripts.
The game itself takes place in the Country of Chorale- A country that, four years ago, was known as the Choorish Empire. The Choorish Empire had initially been formed 500 years ago in the small area now known as the Chorale region and expanded to encompass numerous other areas around it until it became the body that holds its modern political borders. The people of Chorale expanded to take over the Tersl to the east, the Zerinv to the southeast, the Lasenki of the Morrannon mountains, the Cloahan to the northwest, and the Phaenlands to the northeast. Technically also a holding of the Choorish empire up to that point was the Nekthar Prarie, which lay to the southwest of Chorale, but it was never truly subjugated, being a region that is made up of roving nomadic tribes as opposed to the centralized peoples of the other regions that the Choorish Empire managed to conquer. 100 years ago, a succession of wars was fought against Chorale's two southern neighbors, Shema and Vortan, and two pieces of land were won and became known as the Shemana and Vortana regions of the choorish Empire, shemana being south of Nekthor and Vortana being south of Zerinv.
This country had reached the breaking point six years ago, when religious tensions with the Church of Randa (centered in the Phaenlands) came to a head and the followers of Randa revolted, took over the Phaenlands and the Tersl region, and re-named these two areas The Fist of Randa and Randa's Forearm. From that point onward, the various regions began to experience unrest until a concentrated rebellion had formed in the Nekthor colony town of Shoshanna, lead by a prarie tribesman by the name of Silas Vashti. This man became known as the Hero Vashti.
The Hero Vashti led his soldiers with the ideal of a government that did not opporess the people, and brought the thoughts of freedom that had been brewing in the Nekthor region for centuries to the forefront, winning allies in Schemana and Vortana, as well as all across the Zerinv and Cloahan regions. This rebellion, allied with the Lands of Randa, drove the Choorish Empire out of its capitol city of Chorale, and all the way out to the Shermat Penninsula, and a stalemate was reached. The royals had enough money to perpetually ship themselves the supplies they needed from the cities of Shermat, and the ground is amazingly easy to defend since the Choorish Empire is mostly land-locked, and thus lacks the means to build a navy without outside help.
Then the Cataclysm of Shermat occured- A large earthquake followed by a tsunami and a flood that sunk the entire Shermat Penninsula, leaving only a few places that were built high enough- Like the cities of Nietzkreg and Shermat- standing, and thus creating the Shermat Archipeligo.
This was considered a great victory for the people of the new Nation of Chorale, who adopted the name of the old ruling region and the old capitol city for their new country. The Territories of Randa, as well as the myriad regions and provinces, joined together to form this country.
The worst elements of the Choorish remains were put into the fastness of the remote Morranon Prison, which is in turn hidden in the Morranon mountains to the point that no one is quite sure where it is. And most people are glad to have those elements drop off from the political spectrum.
Everything was fine after the shift in government was declared.
Then Silas Vashti died.
The government had been set up democratically, therefore no great turmoil ensued- a new leader was swiftly elected to take Vashti's place. Investigations were eventually carried out that pointed to conspiracies by Shema and Vortan to assassinate Silas Vashti, and so wars on those two powers were waged- successfully adding three new regions and the powerful far southern foothold at Port Sharkhl...
And this is all that I'll reveal for now- Post if you have interest! <p>[---------------------------]
"There is great disorder under Heaven, and the situation is excellent."
-Mao Tse-Tung</p>Edited by: The Great Nevareh at: 10/24/04 5:31 pm
It's a massive thing I'm planning, and highly detailed, so I'll be collecting my thoughts here.
Since no one has the vaguest idea what this is, I'll start transcribing my notes as to world-setting here.
"I just wanted to build a better world... Is that so wrong?"
- The Hero Silas Vashti, Morrannon Prison Transcripts.
The game itself takes place in the Country of Chorale- A country that, four years ago, was known as the Choorish Empire. The Choorish Empire had initially been formed 500 years ago in the small area now known as the Chorale region and expanded to encompass numerous other areas around it until it became the body that holds its modern political borders. The people of Chorale expanded to take over the Tersl to the east, the Zerinv to the southeast, the Lasenki of the Morrannon mountains, the Cloahan to the northwest, and the Phaenlands to the northeast. Technically also a holding of the Choorish empire up to that point was the Nekthar Prarie, which lay to the southwest of Chorale, but it was never truly subjugated, being a region that is made up of roving nomadic tribes as opposed to the centralized peoples of the other regions that the Choorish Empire managed to conquer. 100 years ago, a succession of wars was fought against Chorale's two southern neighbors, Shema and Vortan, and two pieces of land were won and became known as the Shemana and Vortana regions of the choorish Empire, shemana being south of Nekthor and Vortana being south of Zerinv.
This country had reached the breaking point six years ago, when religious tensions with the Church of Randa (centered in the Phaenlands) came to a head and the followers of Randa revolted, took over the Phaenlands and the Tersl region, and re-named these two areas The Fist of Randa and Randa's Forearm. From that point onward, the various regions began to experience unrest until a concentrated rebellion had formed in the Nekthor colony town of Shoshanna, lead by a prarie tribesman by the name of Silas Vashti. This man became known as the Hero Vashti.
The Hero Vashti led his soldiers with the ideal of a government that did not opporess the people, and brought the thoughts of freedom that had been brewing in the Nekthor region for centuries to the forefront, winning allies in Schemana and Vortana, as well as all across the Zerinv and Cloahan regions. This rebellion, allied with the Lands of Randa, drove the Choorish Empire out of its capitol city of Chorale, and all the way out to the Shermat Penninsula, and a stalemate was reached. The royals had enough money to perpetually ship themselves the supplies they needed from the cities of Shermat, and the ground is amazingly easy to defend since the Choorish Empire is mostly land-locked, and thus lacks the means to build a navy without outside help.
Then the Cataclysm of Shermat occured- A large earthquake followed by a tsunami and a flood that sunk the entire Shermat Penninsula, leaving only a few places that were built high enough- Like the cities of Nietzkreg and Shermat- standing, and thus creating the Shermat Archipeligo.
This was considered a great victory for the people of the new Nation of Chorale, who adopted the name of the old ruling region and the old capitol city for their new country. The Territories of Randa, as well as the myriad regions and provinces, joined together to form this country.
The worst elements of the Choorish remains were put into the fastness of the remote Morranon Prison, which is in turn hidden in the Morranon mountains to the point that no one is quite sure where it is. And most people are glad to have those elements drop off from the political spectrum.
Everything was fine after the shift in government was declared.
Then Silas Vashti died.
The government had been set up democratically, therefore no great turmoil ensued- a new leader was swiftly elected to take Vashti's place. Investigations were eventually carried out that pointed to conspiracies by Shema and Vortan to assassinate Silas Vashti, and so wars on those two powers were waged- successfully adding three new regions and the powerful far southern foothold at Port Sharkhl...
And this is all that I'll reveal for now- Post if you have interest! <p>[---------------------------]
"There is great disorder under Heaven, and the situation is excellent."
-Mao Tse-Tung</p>Edited by: The Great Nevareh at: 10/24/04 5:31 pm