Philsys char critique, pwease!

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Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby SALSAlys » Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:31 pm

Um... my first attempt at making a Philsys stat sheet for one of my chars, haven't included her background and description, just stats, skills and techs. Any serious fawked-up stuff I've done? =D And tips? I didn't intend for her to be an extreme fighting char or a mage, but the kind of person who'd dodge or deflect most attacks during a fight.

Name: Yfandes Valencia
Race: Storm Dragon

Cou: +3
Wisdom: +2
Intuition: +3
Charisma: +2
Agility: +5
Dexterity: +2
Strength: +1
Stamina: +1
Magic Aptitude: +2

Max HP: 60
Max MP: 45
TP: 20
Init: 8+2d6 (10-20)

Base AT/PA: 12/12
Modified for skill: 12/13

Weapon Damage: Dagger (4 / 7/ 9, +2/-1)
Thrusting: 5+1d6
Slashing: 9 + 2d4
Chopping: 12 + 2d6

Skills:
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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby JoshuaDurron » Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:38 pm

You've got 23 points distributed in your stats. Unless that comes from being a storm dragon, it'll need changing. Other than that, I can see nothing wrong with the sheet! =D <p>

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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby Shinigori V2 » Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:54 pm

JD beat me to it. You got an extra 2 points there that need dealing with.


If that's what you sent me to check earlier and I somehow missed it, blame my sucky math o_o;

Other than that, it seems okay. It also amuses me that now Griff and Yfandes look like even bigger opposites :D <p>

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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby SALSAlys » Wed Oct 15, 2003 12:01 am

'Kay, fixed the stats. Was tweaking them earlier to make her rely more on agility, forgot to lower some other stats to compensate. >.>;; Also tweaked with her elemental resistance.

And just realized I should put something on there about how she can switch to full dragon form. Rawr. And maybe a lightning spell or two.


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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby JoshuaDurron » Wed Oct 15, 2003 12:45 am

OMG, also: I'm not sure you need BOTH Wind and Lightning. But don't quote me on it. I suggest consulting AM. <p>

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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby Shinigori V2 » Wed Oct 15, 2003 1:25 am

I think that she would, if she wants both Wind and Lightning magic. <p>

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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby WillBaseton » Wed Oct 15, 2003 8:39 am

I still think that Wind and Lightning go together. Then again, meh. <p>
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Re: Philsys char critique, pwease!

Unread postby Divinegon2130 » Wed Oct 15, 2003 8:53 am

I have a few specific concerns.

First, I believe the MP cost of Deflect is too low, even for such an overall minor effect, because of the duration of the spell. For how much it would be, I'm not certain, but I'd say at least 7 MP for its current effect.

Also, Wing Snap's damage is too low, after investigating other characters with similar attacks (namely Enlil). I would say change the damage to TP+TPd6.

Other than those, I can't see any concern that hasn't already been addressed. <p>

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Unread postby Archmage144 » Wed Oct 15, 2003 8:58 am

Wind and Lightning magic are effectively the same skill.

Up Deflect's cost to 6 MP.



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Re: Comments:

Unread postby Banjooie » Wed Oct 15, 2003 10:42 am

Wait a minute.

TP + TPd6?


Thus, if you spent 20 TP..


20 + 20d6

That's a potential of a level one character dealing 140 damage with her -wings-.
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Re: Comments:

Unread postby Divinegon2130 » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:25 am

Banj, that's the reason why there's a limit to the cost.

In Yfandes's case, she can only expend a maximum of 5 TP on the attack. Thus no more than 5+5d6, or 10-35 damage. <p>

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Re: Comments:

Unread postby Elementalist Daien » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:26 am

1-5 TP only. Foo.


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Re: Comments:

Unread postby SALSAlys » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:20 pm

Right, I've now lumped Wind and Thunder into Storm Magic, and made her able to do telepathy and shizzle, since I realized I forgot to have her able to do that. And added her innate ability to do dragon stuff. As well as messed with the wing attack.



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