Tell me what you think, I think it's good, but tell me what you think, Is it cheesy? Or is it good? Is it stupid? cliche? or what?
Outside of a small town near doma city, there is a
temple, a temple of music.
In the back of the temple, there is a door, with the inscription, "Here lies the angel of music, here lies aria, awaken him you great and wise musician, awaken him with an offering of that which is perfect in form."
The first to try his luck, was a man named david, a great musician of times past. He journeyed many miles to arrive at the door, and was welcomed by a great crowd. After a short time, he played a tune of such beauty that all the crowd was moved to tears. But aria did not awaken.
Another notable musician was named peter, He arrived, again to a great crowd. He walked up to the door, took out his violin, and played a single perfect note, but aria did not awaken.
Finally there was edward, an musician of some skill, but a man who was wiser than many. He walked to the door, alone, silent. He simply said, "Oh great creature of beauty, I am an imperfect musician, my music is flawed. I will now perform for you the only perfect piece I am capable of playing, silence."
After a few moments, the door began to open, and a voice began to sing,
"Oh, wise person of music.
Where have you been for so long?
You had the wisdom to wake me,
How could *they* all be so wrong?
Oh great musicion of singing,
The power of music endows you.
the veil of perfection is wrong
my spirit and yours end as two.
Oh creature of beauty
I've yearned for freedom so long,
Become one with the angel,
And become one with the song!!