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need comments, YET another new character

Unread postby wkz » Thu Mar 25, 2004 1:23 pm

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Re: need comments, YET another new character

Unread postby Banjooie » Thu Mar 25, 2004 3:31 pm

Pelos: Hzar, I'm not the necromancer, but can I ask you a question?

Hzar: What. Would. That. Be?


Pelos: What the /hell/?

Hzar: Well. Let. Me. See.

Hzar: DIRAN!

Diran: Wh' th' bugger're you bothering me for? ...Ah, I see. Alright, I'll explain, since even I can tell.


Courage, fine, Wisdome, fine, Intuition....er, right, okay, okay...

Charisma -5? Well, he /is/ a zombie...but you're going to get pounded on that one, my friend. Let's just say you actually need your CHA stat, and pumping everything into Stamina,

and...

Agility 4, well, that's acceptable, I guess....Dex, well, fine...

STRENGTH OF 7!? Good ALTHENA sir! Choark is a barbarian wielding a gigantic hammer, and HE had 7! Your zombie's only 96 pounds! Choark could THROW HIM SIXTY YARDS.

....Stamina of 10. ...I'm going to pretend I didn't see that.

And, uh, Magic 0, fine.


As for the appearance, he's your average mysterious cloaked figure. My goddess, his personality! He's semi-evil! With a tragic past!

Your background's livable. I suppose.

Your abilities..christ, Hzar, get back over here....


Hzar: Okay.

Zombies. Are. Rotting. Corpses. They. Are. Not. Supermen.

Critical. Hit. For. Maximum. Damage. My. Posterior.

Zombies. Also. Do. Not. Generally. Act. Chummy. Towards. Each. Other.

Berserk? Zombies. Go. Berserk?

As. For. Regeneration. That. Is. Livable.


Meldon: Now, you have one major flaw in your plan; Namely, you're never going to get into a party or even CI with this character, ever. What's the point of making characters you can't RP with? <p><Chat> <Matto says, "What's up?"
<Chat> <Prince_Herb says, "Angst."
<Chat> <Prince_Herb says, "Drama."
<Chat> <Prince_Herb says, "Betrayal."
<Chat> <Prince_Herb says, "Plushies."</p>

Uncle Pervy
 

Re: need comments, YET another new character

Unread postby Uncle Pervy » Thu Mar 25, 2004 3:35 pm

The Banj raises many points, and they are all good.


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Re: need comments, YET another new character

Unread postby Spleen » Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:20 pm

Does he raise them...FROM THE DEAD???



...sorry, I had to. <p>_________________
OLHADO: "You killed more people than anybody in history."
ENDER: "Be the best at whatever you do, that's what my mother always told me."
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Uncle Pervy
 

Re: need comments, YET another new character

Unread postby Uncle Pervy » Fri Mar 26, 2004 12:03 am

...

I'll be damned. I actually didn't see that coming. o_o


wkz
 

*sigh*

Unread postby wkz » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:33 am

Hmmm....
Ouch....
Hmmm.....
Guess this translation of cliche zombie to Rp character did not translate well...

first things first, Quote:"Meldon: Now, you have one major flaw in your plan; Namely, you're never going to get into a party or even CI with this character, ever. What's the point of making characters you can't RP with?"
A: So that when i make The character i really want to use, i wouldn't fall into the same traps as this guy...

quote:"As for the appearance, he's your average mysterious cloaked figure. My goddess, his personality! He's semi-evil! With a tragic past!"
..... Try show your rotting zombie face to a bar, and not get blungeoned in the process. And he is not semi-evil, just having an evil Hunger.

Guess i would have to rethink some of the stats, and most of the skills... If i decide to remake him...


Szlapka
 

Re: *sigh*

Unread postby Szlapka » Thu Apr 08, 2004 10:37 am

This lunge is seriously broken too, 100% bite chance??? If someone only sidestepped, he should miss completely.

Also think about changing the stats, at least put 1 in Cha.

I can understand the lack of background of this "semi-evil" problem, but I would like to know more about him BEFORE he died.

Also, good personality, but I would make him THAT angst. if he is able to remember his past, he should remember a lot more of his personality, before he kills his friends in a frenzy and then becomes angst-ball.

And about that, how can you hope to work in an RP with this guy when his teammates run the risk of dying in each game?



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