(Camanalis.
If you plan to seriously RP at this community, you must read
this thread. Read it thoroughly and give it due thought and consideration.
Now. Look at your "RP." It is, essentially, one line. Quite frankly, this isn't good enough.
Go into the other threads in this forum. For instance,
Starfall. Notice how each post is several paragraphs long, of well-written, properly spelled, grammatically correct, standardized English. It is also a creative, interesting, engaging RP. This is how an RP should be.
Look again at your RP.
See the difference?
Bring your RPing up to Starfall's standards, or find another community to RP at. I personally suggest
GoGaia.)
Edited by: pd Rydia at: 5/17/04 3:33 pm