The 2000 Year War

[Sonicshot45]

Chapter 1
Begining of
the end
The earth was once beautiful but now its desolute. Unable to live on the earth humans leave the once beautiful planet and colonize the infinity of space. The year is 3651. The colony's have split themselves into 2 sides, the White Lions led by Ulysses S. Grant II and the Black Lions led by an unknown leader. This war lasted so long historians named
it the 2000 year war. 2000 years later...
White Lions Base 0948 hours
"How can we stop this war? Every attack we launch fails and we're spending too much money." "Not to mention they are controlling all of our colony's one by one. It all seems hopeless." "What about the colony's of New Gettysburg and New Vicksburg, Taren?" "They have Gettysburg and our planning an attack on Vicksburg as we speak, Commander." "Then go to New Gettysburg and take it over. Hurry you two, before the attack on Vicksburg
so we can muster our forces." "Yes sir."
New Gettysburg Base 1100 hours
"I hate guard duty. No action involvled." "I here you there Batosi. But orders are orders." "Guess you're right, Shin. At least we're getting paid but...what the?!" "White Lions!" The guards rush out of the base to engage the White Lions. Saren and Taren get to Shin and Batosi. "Out of our way!" "Sorry thats denied." "Fine then. We'll go through you."
Saren: Weapon: Broadsword
HP: 1500/1500 MP: 89/89 Lv.15
Taren: Weapon: Short Staff
HP: 750/750 MP: 154/154 Lv.10
vs. Batosi and Shin
Saren is first and attacks Batosi. 2500/3000. Shin is next and uses Fire on Taren. 490/750. Batosi is next and attacks Taren. 190/750. Taren is next and uses Cure on himself. 690/750. 148/154. Saren is next and uses Lightning Stab on Batosi. 1500/3000. 69/89. Shin is next and uses Ice on Saren. 950/1500. Batosi is next and attacks Taren. 390/750. Taren is next and uses Fire on Batosi. 600/3000. 138/154. Saren is next and attacks Batosi. 100/3000. "I give up." Shin is next and uses Thunder on Saren. 500/1500. Limit Break! Taren is next and uses Cure on Saren. 1100/1500. 132/154. Saren is next and uses Limit Break, Cross-Slash on Shin. 1000/2500. Shin is next and attacks Taren. 190/750. Taren is next and
defends. Saren is next and attacks Shin. 100/2500. "What will become of us?"
End of Chapter 1

[pd Rydia]

(Your, ah, concept is not too bad, but your mechanics need work, specifically your paragraph spacing. And, um...the numbers you have there are completely nonsensical, arbitrary, and useless. Sorry, this isn't really up to RPGWW standards. Feel free to stick around and observe how some very fine GMs like Archmage run RPs.)

[sonicshot45]

I really couldnt get the spacing right because I copy and pasted it from Notepad. Besides this tory is the only thing to occupy my leftover time at school. Thx Rydia at least 1 person told me what I did wrong.

[Vampire Jester Jinx]

(n_n you might wanna try reading this. it'll help alot! http://www.davidr.com/rpgww go to the rp stuff section. it has all our collective information on our rping style, worlds and systems etc. and welcome. it's usually standard practice to post in the ooc forum to recruit people for rps before hand as well.)