The Armada Gauntlet

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Re: The Armada Gauntlet: Conclusion

Unread postby Uncle Pervy » Wed Apr 02, 2003 3:36 am

Hmmmmm....

Try writing it out as a proper remembrance. Then, see what you can do to make it feel more hurried without losing the cohesion.

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Nekogami
 
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Re: The Armada Gauntlet: Conclusion

Unread postby Nekogami » Wed Apr 02, 2003 11:41 am

o.o Good work here, Charles.

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Words to live by:
OMG PRIAM: ninja sex would be neither felt nor seen by either partner
OMG PRIAM: each would just suddenly need a smoke
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