Before I begin, I should note if I'm going to do this right, it'll have to be broken up into several posts, so look for more! Also, don't hold back on neat things like constructive criticism. They will be well recieved here!
<div style="text-align:center">The History of Bes, Anteo and Saedeus</div>
Saedeus, the Scorpion Demon, Necromancer and Shadow Magus. Despite his eloquent, self given title, the demon's story had a decidedly more humble begining.
He was involved in the Necromancy war against Baron years ago. With all his power, you might think he was a General? Not quite. An officer then? Not exactly.
Saedeus was the servant of Necromancer army. Cannon fodder. He had either to run point against the Baronian forces with others in his position, and most certainly die, or to find a means of escape.
As fate would have it, such a means presented itself. Two young men, an apprentice mage and a squire, sat on a hill top late in the night. They had opened a nexus in an attempt to summon forth their own demonic servant. Saedeus could see it was a very, very poorly casted spell. A willing demon would have to step through of their own accord, knowing it would mean being bound to these pathetic humans. Of course, he siezed the oppourtunity to prolong his pathetic existence.
However, in his rush to escape his fate, Saedeus did not see the full extent of how poorly the young mage's spell had been cast. All three of them learned immediately after the demon entered the field of magic and became visible to them.
Energy surrounded the three beings, and drew them in closer, none of them able to resist the forces the mage had weaved into his ritual circle. There was a flash of light the shone throughout all of Baron as the three touched.
When it faded, one figure remained, layying on the hill top unconcious for the next hour.
Let the picking apart begin! ^^; edit: Yay! Grammar fix! <p>_______________
Jeridan: Holder of the "Tastes like Chicken" Award.</p>Edited by: [url=http://pub30.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=besyanteo@rpgww60462>Besyanteo</A] at: 11/16/03 1:13 am