Sappy poem

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AppleFetish
 

Sappy poem

Unread postby AppleFetish » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:40 am

My love…

Is for you, rising sun
as all my days have begun
All faces I see, all eyes shun me
Black air fills my lung

Is for you, orange sky
as days pass me by
Upon fluffy cloud I lie
I knew I was born to fly

They tie my feet, curses his through my teeth
Black dead tongue, words escape my lung

Is for you, burnt earth
Preach as they do of your rebirth
Woven of night, studded of mirth
This is my robe, free of hurt

“We’ve got her beat,” these sheep bleat
I can smell their rotting meat

Not you black earth, parched since birth

Is for you, ocean blue
Only your face is true
The ground you renew
You alone possess the rhealm’s glue

Is for you, flesh of true man
Ruling me and the land upon which I stand
You satisfy me and do not demand
I will bow, and obey your every command
From my world you drain the bland
Devouring time’s sand
Skew from up tight with this gland
Pure rainbow light you bring to me canned

Is for you swishing time
No longer just a line so fine
but very much more
enough to make us soar



AppleFetish
 

Re: Sappy poem

Unread postby AppleFetish » Fri Aug 15, 2003 7:20 am

ur poem sucks


Uncle Pervy
 

Re: Sappy poem

Unread postby Uncle Pervy » Sun Aug 17, 2003 2:06 pm

Hmm. I see two possibilities here.

1. Someone who is a moron hijacked Fetish's account.
2. Fetish is attention whoring.

Care to fill us in, Fetish?




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Re: Sappy poem

Unread postby Deeum » Sun Aug 17, 2003 2:07 pm

OR, it could be as Dan mentioned.
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Re: Sappy poem

Unread postby SuperRube » Mon Aug 18, 2003 1:43 am

I dunno... she could be attempting to "Beat everyone to the punch". You know, immediatly responding to her post in the way she expects it to be responded to in what is obviously the WITTIEST THING EVER SEEN ON THIS FOURM EVER.

...or I'm just reading too much into it. I dunno. <p>

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Kadrin77
 

Re: Sappy poem

Unread postby Kadrin77 » Mon Aug 18, 2003 11:23 am

It's a damn good poem, though. Nice work, Fetish.


AppleFetish
 

well

Unread postby AppleFetish » Tue Aug 19, 2003 6:00 am

I responded to my own poem because no one else really had, and I was bored and I don't really know what to say to the things that other people post. Seeing as how everything I say comes out wrong and I get called names. So I just try to not offend people and I figured the one person I couldn't offend was myself. So I decided not to pat myself on the back and tell myself my poem was cool, because it's obvious i already thought it was cool, otherwise I wouldn't have posted it. So i just made a simple message thinking no one would notice. Thanks for your feedback.


Kadrin77
 

Re: well

Unread postby Kadrin77 » Thu Aug 21, 2003 7:30 pm

Hey, I commented about the damn poem! :(


AppleFetish
 

mm-hm ::nod nod::

Unread postby AppleFetish » Fri Aug 22, 2003 12:18 am

I see you did, but I responded first...just meant at the time that I did that no one had yet... Thank you!


Kadrin77
 

Re: mm-hm ::nod nod::

Unread postby Kadrin77 » Fri Aug 22, 2003 5:08 pm

*nods*


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Re: mm-hm ::nod nod::

Unread postby Koneko » Fri Aug 22, 2003 11:08 pm

In other words, Pervy, number two. *sagenod* <p>

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