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Don't you judge me.

But please feel free to judge my artwork. I can only belt out drawings once every long while, so feedback is kinda one of my priorities.

I only wish I had the courage to actually ink this thing all proper-like...


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My head moves around inside the bag, it's not like I'm drinking through my actual eye socket.</p>

... That's very good.

That's very very good.

You could easily design t-shirts, do posters, whatever. Do you already work as a professional artist? <p><div style="text-align:center"></div></p>

I love the fiery background as well as the yellow stringy stuff behind his head.

Edited by: [url=http://p068.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=lauritzmelchior>Lauritz] at: 4/19/05 22:20

It's kind of like Evangli-whatits and Gundumb had a baby and then set it on fire.

Which is to say that, from a design stand point, it's pretty damn badass and totally going to frighten small children.

To be honest, however, from a technical standpoint the image has a kind of 2-dimensional aspect that I don't know that I like. I think this largely has to do with the fact that the feet and the tail or whatever all land on about the same point on the page. Makes the whole thing sort of lack depth. However, this is a small issue that can be easily fixed. Give the line work a bit more weight and make the pose a bit less symmetrical and I'm sure that bastard will jump right off the page and kick someones ass.

thats a gundam? sorry, but thats just TOO BADASS to be just a simple gundam. it's awesome. <p><div style="text-align:center"> <span style="color:fuchsia;font-family:comic sans ms;font-size:large;">LAMBO SWIMS LIKE A BRICK!!</span>

my deviant art thingy!
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"I've been to heaven and hell and i still don't know if there is a god or a devil"
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Makes me think of some kind of beetle. I like it.

Rube's right about the whole 2D/3D thing, though. <p>

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First off, excellent rendering. Very saurian in appearance, like a purple T-Rex (that you can take seriously), and the fire effect is superb. Very t-shirt (heck, wallscroll) worthy, yes.

And one thing, of minor note: No one knows it's a Gundam until someone says, "Look! It's a GUNDAM!" <p>--------------------
UT! No complaining! If you didn't want to be slaves, you should have told your parents to put up a less pitiful defense against the TIK'LA! Mm? Did any of you do that? I didn't think so...

-Bob the Angry Flower</p>

AAAH TRILOBITES FROM ANTARCTICA!!! <p>

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<div style="text-align:center">"Pants are bad!!! We should wear pants only on our head you conformist bastard!!! Pants are the devils work!! Run freee!! And pantless!!!" -- Vulture</div></p>

Rydia, I was hoping for serious feeback.

It's a trilobite form antarctica OMG ON FIAR!!!!!!!!1111unedeucetrois

Remember, kids; only YOU can prevent Trilobite FIARS.

Hm... I just had an idea. *wanders to other thread for a bit* <p>---
My head moves around inside the bag, it's not like I'm drinking through my actual eye socket.</p>

Ah, but you received serious feedback! Just not -ONLY- serious feedback. :0 Not all of us can critique all types of art, or are so inclined.

I just felt like making an obscure reference. You can blame Mike. <p>

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<div style="text-align:center">"Pants are bad!!! We should wear pants only on our head you conformist bastard!!! Pants are the devils work!! Run freee!! And pantless!!!" -- Vulture</div></p>

S'ok. Twas being silly myself there. <p>---
My head moves around inside the bag, it's not like I'm drinking through my actual eye socket.</p>

THAT IS NOT ALLOWED! <p>

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<div style="text-align:center">"Pants are bad!!! We should wear pants only on our head you conformist bastard!!! Pants are the devils work!! Run freee!! And pantless!!!" -- Vulture</div></p>

*hangs head*

You're supposed to hang by the neck there, dood.

Also, that's pretty groovy. <p>---------------------------

Your are not supposed to be reading this!</p>

Rube said everything I was going to say, only he did it better. <p><div style="text-align:center"></div></p>