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Meh. Just a quick doodle.

It's Sizreina. <p>

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<center><small>Dragonhalf in English: a manga

It's big, and it's red / The red dragon, oh, the dread dragon / but never fear, for Dick is here / To slay the dragon~!</p>

That's pretty good. o.o Critique necessary? <p>

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Nekogami Character Pantheon--Deviant Art Gallery--LiveJournal</div>
<span style="font-size:xx-small;">Words to live by:
OMG PRIAM: ninja sex would be neither felt nor seen by either partner
OMG PRIAM: each would just suddenly need a smoke
Choark: Good luck there. You'll have to shit out darkness and send people into oblivion.</span></p>

Critique is welcomed if you are so inclined! <p>

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<center><small>Dragonhalf in English: a manga

It's big, and it's red / The red dragon, oh, the dread dragon / but never fear, for Dick is here / To slay the dragon~!</p>

Everything down to the knees is good but after that the legs skew to the right. To correct this try drawing a faint vertical line on the paper bisecting Siz. This will help you prevent skewing.

Now that you have that wooden model that should help too.

My favorite part of the pic is the hand holding the mic. Why? because it's flawlessly drawn! <p>

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Nekogami Character Pantheon--Deviant Art Gallery--LiveJournal</div>
<span style="font-size:xx-small;">Words to live by:
OMG PRIAM: ninja sex would be neither felt nor seen by either partner
OMG PRIAM: each would just suddenly need a smoke
Choark: Good luck there. You'll have to shit out darkness and send people into oblivion.</span></p>

The pose is Spiffeh.
Dunno what there is about it.. I just like it.

Amanda has already pointed out some things already.
but there is also an issue of her chest. Her (her) right boob looks alittle low compared to the left one.

Getting better everyday, Dia. Keep it up. <p><div style="text-align:center">

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