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[Nick Shogun]

Okay, I'm sorry this took so long. I won't lie--I could've finished this a helluva long time ago, but I've been doing other stuff, and this should have been at the top of my drawing list.

So, I like this picture, but I had a hard time with the fin on his back and the whole "hunchback" thing. Also, the biceps gave me trouble. This could be considered a 'rough' if you want me to give it another go.

Kirio:


Edited by: [url=http://b3.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=nickshogun>Nick] at: 4/25/04 2:22 am

[bunnygirle78]

sniff bunny can not see. wa.

I want to see it. <p>

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Just one thing, don't make me go Chibi on your ass.</p>

[pd Rydia]

That's good stuff, man. It's...strange. But it IS one of Div's RP characters, I take it, so that's to be expected. I especially like the hands, although something seems off about the shape of the feet. Could just be the weird anatomy. <p>

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It's big, and it's red / The red dragon, oh, the dread dragon / but never fear, for Dick is here / To slay the dragon~!</p>

[Deeum]

.. STREET SHARKS.


Well, that's what it looks like. :P

Tis cool. Thanks all i can say. I do like the lineart for this. <p><div style="text-align:center">

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[Divinegon2130]

I think this is absolutely great.

Even though I'd imagined the tail lower (I'd aimed for it sticking out the back of his pants, rather than extending from his neck - that's the best way I can describe it - the way you drew it), the rest is about as accurate as it gets. I especially like the way the muscle tone is presented.

<s>If it weren't for the situation with the tail, I'd be fine with this one, but might I request a second attempt with the placement of the tail adjusted?</s>

*couldn't help herself* <p>

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[Nick Shogun]

Aye, sure, I'll give it another go tonight.

[bunnygirle78]

yay bunny can see it now. Very cool I love the way he looks. <p>

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Just one thing, don't make me go Chibi on your ass.</p>

[Vampire Jester Jinx]

Aye tis good stuff Nick. Love that muscletone. Fabulous. <p><div style="text-align:center"></div></p>

[Nick Shogun]

Blah. Hope this is better.

[pd Rydia]

Those are, once again, spiffy hands.

And belt. <p>

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<center><small>Dragonhalf in English: a manga

It's big, and it's red / The red dragon, oh, the dread dragon / but never fear, for Dick is here / To slay the dragon~!</p>

[Vampire Jester Jinx]

Indeed groovy hands. it is full of neatness. and maybe pie. you never know about those shark men.
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[Lord McBastard]

It's Mako from the Savage Dragon!

Yaay! <p><div style="text-align:center">

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[Nick Shogun]

Thanks for the critiques, but I wish Div would reply to this too.

[Divinegon2130]

Sorry about waiting so long on this; I've just been busy.

And it's DEFINITELY better. Not sure what else I can say, really...... <p>

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[Nick Shogun]

No, you've said enough. Just knowing that you're happy at last makes me feel all warm...