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...I went and sketched some of the characters in my RP, Curse of the Shadow Walkers. I'm illustrating it, so I need to draw them right.

Critique?

img45.photobucket.com/alb...igger1.jpg

img45.photobucket.com/alb...sybil1.jpg

img45.photobucket.com/alb...dovev1.jpg

img45.photobucket.com/alb...eryle1.jpg




Edited by: Nick Shogun at: 4/2/04 7:54 pm

Shit, they worked a second ago... gimme a second.

EDIT: Fixed! -_-

Edited by: [url=http://pub30.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=nickshogun>Nick] at: 4/2/04 7:55 pm

so far, I'm getting a File Not found (URL I mean) on all of them... <p>------
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I do not go medieval on peoples asses. I go Renaissance. There's an important difference. Medieval is just beating someone with a mace, but Renaissance is artful, sophisticated. Smooth, yet firm, powerful, yet distinct. Everyone knows when someone's gone Medieval on their ass, but they don't know Renaissance until its too late. -Wiseass Dave </p>

Of the links, Dovev and Trigger are the most spiffy. Especially Dovev. That's an awesome ponytail. Something's off about Sybil, though...her arms are wacky.

In the doodle page of many characters, again Trigger and Dovev are rockin'. I like the detail you've got on Trigger, though some of it's a little...I don't know, generic? Dovev's coat is spiffarriffic. Sybil's got an awesome expression, on the other hand. <p>

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<center>Hello, I'm Dia. I'm a dragongirl, and I bite. RAWR!

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</center><small>-=- "Maybe... or maybe you're just not drunk enough." -- Nakibe
-=- "Magic. As in, big flashy dink!" -- El Bob (Squintz)
-=- "Look hun, it's...uh...raining... ...frogs...O_o;;;" -- Aya, Queen of Doma (LDC)
-=- "I FOUND A CORNER! I found a corner, I found a corner! See, right here! Stuck on the wall! It's a corner! Woo hoo! Now, to stare at it!" -- Daenj'r (KingOfDoma)</small></p>

I don't know if it's style but her head is way off in proportion to her body. <p>---------------Celeste of Elvenhame ---------------

Aaron Lewise of Guildportal: On the up side though, most of the remaining bugs are genuinely evil, sentient beings that actively dodge attempts to thwart them.</p>

Yeah, the proportions are off on Sybil; I'll learn from that. But costume/face/everythingelse-wise, did I draw the characters to the liking of their creators?

dude, Trigger rocks. ^_^

a few changes from what I thought of him before...but I perfer them. This looks awesome. The gun could use a little work...but then again, I'm guessing that those are hard enough as is...and having no artistic skill, I really can't judge.

Very, very cool.
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I do not go medieval on peoples asses. I go Renaissance. There's an important difference. Medieval is just beating someone with a mace, but Renaissance is artful, sophisticated. Smooth, yet firm, powerful, yet distinct. Everyone knows when someone's gone Medieval on their ass, but they don't know Renaissance until its too late. -Wiseass Dave </p>

I'm totally loving all of these, although It hink that you do your guys much better than the girls. Still shibby, though on Meryle her face looks odd... likely because her neck is far too thin, or at an odd angle. Or mayhap both.

Trigger ROCKS!

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Where am i??
*sob*

edit: Very nice drawings of "John Rambo" and "Mr Alucard".

And I guess it is kind of my own fault i was excluded. There wasn't a detailed description of Klaus, until now (see my character's thread for the update)



Edited by: [url=http://pub30.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=wkz@rpgww60462>wkz</A] at: 4/3/04 3:18 am

I drew you and Sal, I just haven't scanned the pictures yet. I'll scan em' Saturday.

Klaus should be hugging an amorph. <p>

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<div style="text-align:center">Why Barius has no family reunions.</div></p>Edited by: [url=http://pub30.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=shinigoriv2>Shinigori]&nbsp; at: 4/3/04 9:16 pm

Micheal Klaus and Zakara preliminary sketches... tell me if they look decent, and if not, what I should change.

img45.photobucket.com/alb...klaus1.jpg

img45.photobucket.com/alb...akara1.jpg

quote:"Klaus should be hugging an amorph."

Klaus: What's wrong with that?
Spoob, Tareen and the rest of the bunch (at that time):*evil glare*
Klaus:*Blue background, "downcast" lines*...

to the kickass artist: The Backpack!! you left out his favourate Backpack!!
And you might want to re-read the description on Klaus's sword again here.
Otherwise, its actually quite good.

Edited by: wkz at: 4/3/04 11:42 pm

SKETCH, people... I'll make the necessary adjustments, wkz. Nice sword, by the by. And it's funny how you used my picture in your profile. Good fun.

Whoo! Mikey's cute and has an adorably clueless look going there. XP I like Zakara too, though I think she'd be sharper-featured. Otherwise, spiff!

you DO realize you still need to introduce your char, SAL.

Will do so later today. *bows head in apologies*