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by **bunnygirle78** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 12:01 am

I did three to get it started.

Hope you like them . .my hand hurts.

must. . .rest hands. . .ouchie. <p>

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at: 10/21/03 9:07 am

by **Uncle Pervy** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 1:50 am

Some nice chibis, there. And it is interesting to see a different look for Enlil ^^

And Because I care:

Fussion = Fusion

Castel = Castle

Amoung = Among (Or is that a Britishism?)

Enil = Enlil

Bowls = bowels

Shes = She's

Rydia = Dia Rai (Never use her last name)

Shild = Shield <p>------------------
Greetings, large black person. Let us not forget to form a team up together and go into the country to inflict the pain of our karate feets on some ass of the giant lizard person.
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by **bunnygirle78** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 7:09 am

thank you Pervy. My spell checker is crap, it missed them. I'm glad you posted how to spell her name.

Enlil, only looks that way because she's tired. I'm not sure what she looks like, I think she wears long white robes, or am I mistaken? If you can post a link to an image of her then I will make sure when I draw her next it will be the right way.

Btw. Another one tonight if I can get to it.

Its my hope to make the story good, and try to keep it funny.

Oh if anyone wants to be in it, submit a char sheet with char description, so I can get your look and powers right. Doesn't't need to be phylis (sorry if I spelled that wrong) it can be just a simple descriptions.
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at: 10/21/03 9:15 am

by **WillBaseton** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 1:37 pm

Coolness! Pervy already handled my critiques, but I am wondering. IS that Will with Dia in the early panel? If it is, I'm honored you remembered his design this long. Of course, I'd love to see more of Will in this, but it's up to ya! Since you already know what he looks like, Will's powers are mainly electrical-based. <p>

Dragons own you. Don't even waste your time trying to argue.

"Why the hell are goons with swords so rare these days?" - Jak Snide</p>

by **BrainWalker** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 1:45 pm

Well, will IS your icon.

Also, I am endlessly amused by the inclusion of the word "toady", although I think it's supposed to be "toadie". Not sure on that.

Also, hay = hey.

Poor narrator.
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by **ikozaedro** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 4:07 pm

meow! i love narrator jokes! yay for 4th wall breaking! well done! <p><div style="text-align:center"><span style="color:fuchsia;font-family:comic sans ms;font-size:large;">LAMBO SWIMS LIKE A BRICK!!!</span></div>
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by **Zemyla** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 4:23 pm

Meh. Fourth-wall breaking is somewhat overdone.

Narrator: No, it isn't!

Anyway, I like the art. However, like people have said, your spelling needs work. <p>-----
Do not taunt Happy Fun Zemyla.

I think boobs are the lesser of two evils. - Inverse (Pervy)
Dammit, Dan, I'm not dating a damn NPC! - OOC Will (Will Baseton)
Of course! Anything worth doing is worth doing completely wrong! - Travis English

Adventurers! | RPG World World | The Phantom Lord's OT Board mkII | Indie Madnesse</p>

by **ArgusDevilmen** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 5:19 pm

Yay eet is back. Can't wait for more! ^_^ <p><div style="text-align:center">

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by **Uncle Pervy** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 8:40 pm

Well, since you asked...

Take whatever elements that you

you like from these

Some are a bit alternate, mind. <p>------------------
Greetings, large black person. Let us not forget to form a team up together and go into the country to inflict the pain of our karate feets on some ass of the giant lizard person.
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by **Endesu** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 9:34 pm

Cute in a deformed way, BG.

Although I don't have any idea what's going on, it looks good so far. Keep it up. <p>

I believe in God, only I spell it Nature.
- Frank Lloyd Wright

WE LOVES THE CHRISTMAS.</p>

by **PopoSujo** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 9:37 pm

I second Reshiki.

Good, but no understanding. <p>

The Media is an organization in the same sense that Ohio is a team. -PriamNevhausten</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 12:01 am

First. Yes Will thats you. You be in it more latter on.

Second, I know its starting off confusing, but what good comic ever stared off making sense right off the bat?

The story will reveal itself as the comic goes on.

Don't worry will, you need to be in it because your part of a fusion.

More to come <p>

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at: 10/22/03 12:03 am

by **Spleen** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 4:22 pm

XD

Tricking someone into being perverted is funny. <p>"Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to being a Republican. Being a Republican leads to being super-rich, or a poor, confused angry red-neck."
-Kram, Iconoclast.

"I heard that he enjoys the company of tentacled monsters." -Fray (referring to Vaniyakna)</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 12:40 am

3 more. .night night.

And just to let you know. That mog is NOT End. He will be in this latter. . .and you'll know when. <p>

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by **ikozaedro** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:02 am

yay! bubblegum slime!!! <p><div style="text-align:center"><span style="color:fuchsia;font-family:comic sans ms;font-size:large;">LAMBO SWIMS LIKE A BRICK!!!</span></div>
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by **BrainWalker** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:43 am

Heheheh... Cho.

Also, BG needs to learn to sort out her speech bubbles. There's a couple places there where aren't placed sequentially. <p><div style="text-align:center">

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by **bunnygirle78** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 11:40 am

Thanks Bw. I'll work on that. I'm always confused about how to set up speech bubbles. .. or in my case. . .boxes.

he he.

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So. . .ya want to poke something with a stick?</p>

by **PopoSujo** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 4:08 pm

Nothing wrong with speech boxes.

And I keep coming up with dirty uses for the slime in my head... Bad Popo! <p>

The Media is an organization in the same sense that Ohio is a team. -PriamNevhausten</p>

by **Darkblade2000us** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 11:08 pm

Very nice story with accompanied art, but the title put and a few parts put a scary thought in my head. Jak and Choark doing the fusion dance. OH the terrible combination that would produce....."Joark!"

by **FlamingDeth** » Fri Oct 24, 2003 4:01 am

FD's guide to speech bubbles!

The ones that are said first go on top and to the left. <p>

I am an <s>arrogant</s> elitist bastard.

And now, since I want to be unique like everybody else, quotes:
"People don't seem to realize, it wasn't a powerful ass poke. It was a powerful poke, to the ass!" ~ Lord McBastard
"So what you're saying is that Nintendo and Sony are in league with each other, and possibly the Red Skull?" ~ EKDS5K

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by **bunnygirle78** » Fri Oct 24, 2003 11:48 am

ooooh

Thank you fd Ill do that. >_^ <p>

So. . .ya want to poke something with a stick?</p>

by **Choark** » Fri Oct 24, 2003 12:28 pm

XD *laughs* Okay some of that did seem out of order but HA!

That was cool *thumbs up* Great work BunnyGirlie

by **bunnygirle78** » Sat Oct 25, 2003 11:31 pm

I'm pretty proud of this one because I took my time to do it right. It took two days to do but I think it looks better. I tried to work on the dialog boxes.

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So. . .ya want to poke something with a stick?</p>

by **PopoSujo** » Sun Oct 26, 2003 8:14 pm

I like the hiding salesman.

Getting better on the boxes too

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The Media is an organization in the same sense that Ohio is a team. -PriamNevhausten</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Wed Oct 29, 2003 1:25 am

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So. . .ya want to poke something with a stick?</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Tue Nov 04, 2003 8:58 pm

<p>

"What would you do with out me Daxter?"
Jak from Jak 2

"Well Jak, I wouldn't be standing two feet tall, covered in fur, walking around a sewer without pants. . .god I miss pants."
Daxter from Jak 2</p>

by **ArgusDevilmen** » Tue Nov 04, 2003 9:00 pm

Mwehehe.... This one has amused me quite a bit I must say. XD <p><div style="text-align:center">

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by **BrainWalker** » Tue Nov 04, 2003 10:00 pm

HA!!! I am amused greatly.

Also, the extra time put forth shows in both the artwork and the storytelling. It seems BG is learning about textbubble placement as well as spelling and grammar.

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by **PopoSujo** » Tue Nov 04, 2003 10:49 pm

You quoted The Simpsons, therefore you rock.

Good comic too! <p>

The Media is an organization in the same sense that Ohio is a team. -PriamNevhausten</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:57 am

Ok. SO this joke might not be so clear. You might get it if you have seen Trigun, or know what cho is talking about in the third panel.

If no one gets it. . .Ill post what it is about.

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"What would you do with out me Daxter?"
Jak from Jak 2

"Well Jak, I wouldn't be standing two feet tall, covered in fur, walking around a sewer without pants. . .god I miss pants."
Daxter from Jak 2</p>

by **Choark** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:59 am

*laughs*

Fantastic! n_n And the extra time and effort is showing - you've got some cool expressions in there to!

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at: 11/5/03 6:04 am

by **Endesu** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 12:30 pm

BG,

Comic looks really, really good so far. :D Facial expressions are cute, and the dialogue is just right.

Wai!,
Endo <p>

The fear of blood tends to create fear for the flesh.
- Silent Hill</p>

by **PopoSujo** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:47 pm

I likes the comic.

I do not, however, get the joke :( <p>

When angry, count to ten; when very angry, swear.
-- Mark Twain</p>

by **Raishilliah** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 3:02 pm

Yay! Very very wai and amusing... and I think I get the joke. Maybe. Regardless, nice job and keep up the good work! <p>

That's arson... I mean, that's awesome! Yeah!

I promise I don't bite... too hard.

If at first you don't succeed, type, type again.</p>

by **ArgusDevilmen** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:33 pm

XD BWAHAHAHAHAHA! *Gets the joke well* <p><div style="text-align:center">

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by **bunnygirle78** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:39 am

<p>

"What would you do with out me Daxter?"
Jak from Jak 2

"Well Jak, I wouldn't be standing two feet tall, covered in fur, walking around a sewer without pants. . .god I miss pants."
Daxter from Jak 2</p>

by **BrainWalker** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:03 am

Choark's messing with the group dynamic XP

Also, castel = castle

I looked up "castel" at dictionary.com, just in case it was actually a word, but it's not. Therefore, spellcheck should catch it, unless your spellchecker has teh gheys.

Also, in that second to last frame there, it should be you're. You know, "you + are = you're". As opposed to "your", which is posessive. "your spellchecker sucks", for instance.

... jeez, am I always like this in the mornings? Maybe I should continue to not wake up before 10 AM on my days off. <p><div style="text-align:center">

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at: 11/6/03 10:13 am

by **bunnygirle78** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 10:31 am

Yeah I know it sucks. Its a crappy program.

I need to get Microsoft word.

Thanks for the correct spelling of castle. <p>

"What would you do with out me Daxter?"
Jak from Jak 2

"Well Jak, I wouldn't be standing two feet tall, covered in fur, walking around a sewer without pants. . .god I miss pants."
Daxter from Jak 2</p>

by **PopoSujo** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 9:19 pm

B.W., usually you're nice and fun and funny and cool. So yes.

And I likes the new comic; still don't get the inside joke from the one before this last one. <p>

When angry, count to ten; when very angry, swear.
-- Mark Twain</p>

by **bunnygirle78** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 11:40 pm

Cho saw her panties.

In the anime Trigun (Where I got it from) A bad guy say Merils undies. <p>

"What would you do with out me Daxter?"
Jak from Jak 2

"Well Jak, I wouldn't be standing two feet tall, covered in fur, walking around a sewer without pants. . .god I miss pants."
Daxter from Jak 2</p>

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