*grins evilly*
Quote:
(Crits Apreciated)
Oh how I love to hear those words.
*snaps fingers and puts on the
Iron Glasses Of Doom*
Remember, I'm only being hard cause I enjoy hearing the screams of tormented souls. Remember you asked for this! Bwa ha hah a ha ha!
Personally, my first horrible comment that will make you reach for your tissues as tears stream from ya eyes is - I think you could have tried to make some of the pencil lines a bit more darker. On some of them it really takse away something from what ya drawn as the lines fade out and makes the picture hard to see.
My second comment (made so your soul cracks from your spirit being torn out) is all your characters have straight back syndrom, where they are all trying to emulate whats it like to be a pole. Remember, the human body is not a metal pole as it stands, it can flow and bend, like the mighty tree. Or in other words, try to add
character to some of the stances - have hips bent, have one leg taking more weight then the other, that sort of thing. Play around with standing stances - as they tell as much about the character as the expression and clothes.
My third overall comment is there eyes - I do this as a horrible blow to your already battered mental state. Now as a guy who has done anime I'm not one to talk of realisum, and it not much of a big deal, however eyes are normally always done so they are at least one eyes length apart. Some of your characters drawn there eyes almost seem to be touching - though I do appriate the fact its due to the head being at an angle - some of them still seem a little close.
Hints on other things:
The first picture I do believe you could probably see the other ear on both characters because of there length. Also the guys ear could probably coming down a touch.
Second one I like the espression and hair style. eye could be a touch smaller. Nice overall design - simple but nice - good knife - perhaps his arm is a whee bit long? Depends really, is cartoony so doesn't matter?.
Wai cute and cool. Nothing more to say but I like this.
Nice design overall on this one too. Dig the whole claws, tench coat hair look.
The foot that looks like its suppose to be behind the other one looks like its in front. Arm length looks off too (this time short) but again style thing?.
A good try at a hard to do angle. Keep practicing!
Fool has a good expresson on the face but really does look to rigid. Unbalanced feet as well.
Cute.
*takes off
Iron Glasses Of Doom*
There I went through some stuff. Remember this is only my opinion and it isn't the law on how to draw stuff. Overall though its nice to see ya drawing and enjoying yourself ^_^ and I hope to see more, more, more!
Edited by: [url=http://pub30.ezboard.com/brpgww60462.showUserPublicProfile?gid=choark>Choark</A] at: 11/28/03 12:00 pm