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by **Besyanteo** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 12:13 am

I link et here!

Critiques so far!

Ebil DM TERRY (00:13:17): OK, this might be hard for me since i'm not well versed in drawing anthros.

Well, you have a nice grasp on what goes where. which is a nice start! The side of his mouth is angled alittle weird. try moving the lin down alittle bit? The eyes are nice, but are kinda separated too far apart.. not by much though :P
The collar bone looks to be placed too high you normall see it down alittle bit lower alinging under the shoulders. :{{ other then that and the face his necklace looks like its defying gravity. it's good!

OMG Dirty (00:17:06): the left shoulder?
OMG Dirty (00:17:11): the way you angled the body?
Besyanteo (00:17:15): ours or his?
OMG Dirty (00:17:19): that shoulder should be a little farther back.
OMG Dirty (00:17:20): his.
Besyanteo (00:17:28): ::nod::
OMG Dirty (00:17:30): if you want it at sort of an angle......
OMG Dirty (00:17:51): other than that........pretty darn good! can't notice anything else save what sarah had to say.

If you can add, do so! Otherwise just comment please!

by **SALSAlys** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 1:24 am

*applauds* I already made some comments on AIM, and I stand by them. I still like this, and look forward to you making more artwork. =D

by **Shinigori V2** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 2:01 am

You know my statement.

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by **Justice Augustus** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 3:07 pm

His nostrils appear to be different sizes, but that may be the angel of his...er...snout? What do you called that part anyway?

Other than that, spiffy!
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by **pd Rydia** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 3:12 pm

Muzzle.

Speaking of his muzzle, it seems a bit thin to be canine. It should probably taper a bit more, and by that I mean be thicker at the base. The shoulders are VERY square, could probably use a bit more rounding/slanting to be realistic.

Overall, however, this piece is well done. I really like how you've done the hair here. The ears are good, too. The necklace is a nice touch. <p>

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by **Choark** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 7:11 am

Wooah, been a long time since I stepped into this place.

Well just to add my own opinions, they may end up being incorreect or whatever but its just my opinion in the end. I'm not too bothered about how far apart the eyes are. In the end I think Dogs go by different measurements to humans anyway, however his right eye doesn't look right, sorry to say. Its either the faxct its higher then his left, or if his headis meant to be tilted a little its just the wrong shape.

The nose (or the mouth bit, I'm not really up on Dog body part lingo). I can help here I think. I can tell you thought about it because you marked the middle line - from where it comes from and out to. However you would have gotten a better effect if you followed the outline of the nose. That is, you drew from where you knew the face "starts it" - the middle - but you would of been better following its outline.

Sheesh this is hard without you in front of me.... Ummm....

Right... A second...

I'll edit this with some help pictures...

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OKAY: Please remember this isn't a diffinate guide. I never ever draw furry myself and I'm not to up on what dogs actually look like. This is for consideration only, and to show you what I was on about. Also the three together were only a 5 minute job.

Right, from what I can tell this is basically how you thought of your face. You saw where the the nose starts from and drew out from there.....

However, what I meant earlier was that you should try and consider its Outline. Mine, by the way, is wrong but I'm not the furry artist here =P but it is just to help you show what I was thinking about. If I was to critque mine I'd say I put the nose down far to low for the heads angle. So the outline should not bend in the way it does.

So basically think about the borders of the shape you can see are, rather then where you know it begins.

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by **Besyanteo** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 11:50 am

Cho is better than he gives himself credit for. As for your suggestions: The only problem with your reference drawings is that as far as I know, the bottom of the muzzle outline should line up with the bottom of your circle for the face. As for the rest of it: I shall take it into consideration and use it next time! =D

Dia: Yes, those shoulders need work. And I will also think about what you've told me about the muzzle, too. Thanks everyone for your comments so far!